Leaving

Open to me your cryptic chasm

I hereby relinquish my spiteful state

Swallow my soul into your pit

Where nothing save void exist

 

To them I am nothing but a walking bone

Embellished by time with bent back,

Balding head, grilled skin, and rotten teeth

With some wisdom whitening my hairs

 

I hear the thrilled heart beat of worms

Under my bed, behind the floors, into the earth

They’re exalted to vibe my faltering grace

For sooner or later they’ll celebrate a feast

 

I’m ready to depart but somehow I’m afraid

If my carvings on love one’s heart will be erase

Or if my legacy will waver in the air

So I can’t help but hold on tightly in my bed

 

Stealthily my warmth fumes out of me

And cold prowled in, weakening my pulse

As my mind plays my life’s clip in a span of a wink

While death reaps my ripe soul edible for harvest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/14/2011 4:38:00 AM
Great work of poetry!! A nice creep keeper feel!! I have missed your work and comments my friend. Hope you are well!!
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Date: 10/30/2010 12:53:00 AM
This deep powerful gem goes tmfs!Celene.
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Date: 10/29/2010 12:26:00 PM
Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Juan. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2010 5:26:00 AM
Very raging and powerful thoughts you have penned well in this write Leaving, Juan
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