Leaves Whisked Upward

Breeze-swept lawns
  leaves whisked upward
whirling once again only
  to flutter lazily to the earth

Early November
  tree limbs suddenly bare
Wherefore the rush
  gentle the wind yet

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Date: 11/10/2020 4:58:00 PM
Your imagery makes Novembersparkle.
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Date: 11/10/2020 2:22:00 AM
Amazing description of Autumn and well penned words creating great imagery Gershon. Have a great day.. ~ Ani
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/10/2020 5:18:00 PM
Keep these kind of comments coming, Ani! (lol). Seriously, greatly appreciate your encouragement. Here's to November surprising us! :) gw
Date: 11/9/2020 5:23:00 PM
Dear Gershon, you capture this transition through Autumn beautifully with your gifted pen. I love when the leaves swirl in the air light as feathers, as if on a sigh, only to then come down to scuttle along the ground or rest gently again. Inspiring poetry, dear poet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2020 6:23:00 PM
Very kind of you to write so many inspirational words about this modest piece, Susan. Thank you. ~ Gone with the Wind
Date: 11/9/2020 3:34:00 PM
perfect description of autumnal weather, i especially like the first stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2020 4:55:00 PM
Thanks, Jan... I'm hoping against hope that winter will take its time getting to Chicago... Cheers, Gershon
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