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Leaves Whisked Upward

Breeze-swept lawns leaves whisked upward whirling once again only to flutter lazily to the earth Early November tree limbs suddenly bare Wherefore the rush gentle the wind yet

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/10/2020 4:58:00 PM

Your imagery makes Novembersparkle.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/10/2020 2:22:00 AM

Amazing description of Autumn and well penned words creating great imagery Gershon. Have a great day.. ~ Ani

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/10/2020 5:18:00 PM

Keep these kind of comments coming, Ani! (lol). Seriously, greatly appreciate your encouragement. Here's to November surprising us! :) gw

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/9/2020 5:23:00 PM

Dear Gershon, you capture this transition through Autumn beautifully with your gifted pen. I love when the leaves swirl in the air light as feathers, as if on a sigh, only to then come down to scuttle along the ground or rest gently again. Inspiring poetry, dear poet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2020 6:23:00 PM

Very kind of you to write so many inspirational words about this modest piece, Susan. Thank you. ~ Gone with the Wind

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2020 3:34:00 PM

perfect description of autumnal weather, i especially like the first stanza:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/9/2020 4:55:00 PM

Thanks, Jan... I'm hoping against hope that winter will take its time getting to Chicago... Cheers, Gershon