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Leaves Talking

Lovely golden red-tinged leaves seem lost in conversation,
Eloquently rustling as they flutter to the ground.
Autumn’s breeze is whispering to them a revelation.
Vanquished they are soon to be.  Vanished – they will have no sound.
Eerily the evening creeps, its shadows enveloping the trees.
Stirring in the wind, the leaves now hiss as November’s grieves.

Trembling are the leaves that on lush boughs once brightly swayed.
Ashen is their world; murmuring with fear, crestfallen they lie,
Longing for the green of summer,
Knowing they soon will fade. . . .
Inglorious is our end!  Can you hear their forlorn cry?
Now the wind is quiet, and the leaves have all grown still.
Gone is Harvest Moon. First snow falls with a silent chill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Being in touch with nature lifts the spirit to new heights Andrea. This poem is brilliantly written and so beautiful! Congratulations on having it honored with Poem the week! 7 ; )
Smith Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Great to see this on the list Andrea...congratulations
George   Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Stunningly beautiful, Andrea. What feelings this has stirred in me. Top notch in my books. Elaine
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 10:58 PM
I am so happy to see that this lovely autumn poem was honored with poem of the week Andrea, especially after getting an NA! So well deserved! Congratulations! 7 ; )
Milliner Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Awesome!! Congratulations on your win!
May Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 7:43 PM
Great write and win Andrea...Congrats
Dalei Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Andrea, Very wonderful write. You put lives in leaves here. A7 from me. Enjoyed................//hugs
La France Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Andrea congrats on POTW with this beauty ~
Allison Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 12:32 PM
I'm delighted this is getting the recognition it deserved Andrea firstly POTW and now your top spot in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Singh Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Very poetic! Huge Congrats!
Scars Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 7:40 AM
beautiful Andrea, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Delaney Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on being chosen POTW. I love leaves and your Acrostic is so eloquent and insightful. Loved always, SuZ
Krampe Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 2:44 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Agnes
Lamoureux Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 11:39 PM
Congrats on your top placement Andrea!;0)
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Andrea, I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for participating in my FIRST contest. Now I know how HARD it is to choose. There is so much talent on the Soup! Congratulations on your win! Janice
Sergi Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Hi Andrea: A beautiful poem worthy of the POTW!
Nance Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Leaves talking and I like what you are saying. A picture perfect acrostic, beautiful. Great to see you featured as poem of the week : )
Salehi Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 5:17 PM
My dearest Ghazalier/ sonnetier once again you have won a well deserved honor of having the poem of the week. Congratulations.
Y. Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Hi Andrea, This is such a well written acrostic. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was deserved. Enjoy the honor my friend:-) Alexis
Williams Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 2:14 PM
Wonderful POTW! You said it just rightly.
Arthur Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 6:19 AM
wonderful...congrats on being adjudged the poem of the week
Daniel Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 4:59 AM
This one is very nice, with a 'chilling' end:) congratulations on Poem of the week:) great way to go, Andrea:) hope you are doing fine:)
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Many congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcgrath Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Clever and beautifully written. Great job!
Darling Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 11:50 AM
Yaaaaaa!!! Awesome!! Great Job! I Love Your Art!!! 7!!
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