Leaves Fall On My Face

Nesting birds singing in the trees so tall, They look grand in the summer, spring, or fall. Drenched in the warm early morning sunlight- Flowerbed beauties soft buds unfold bright. I lay, laud and favor whilst breeze flows through A graceful pace in a meadow of blue. Tree leaves fall freely on my head and face, Each float slowly finding a resting place. As long as the sun is shining, you'll find Blossoming blooms; bees lingering behind. Tiny flower clusters snug and fruity, Etched on earth memory of their beauty. 4/28/2020 Poetry Contest: Rhyming Couplets' Sponsored By: Janice Canerdy
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Date: 5/5/2020 11:16:00 PM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in Dear Heart's contest, Eve - I hope you and yours are staying safe and sound. Blessings and keep up the great writing, My Friend! :o) <3
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Date: 5/5/2020 7:08:00 PM
Eve, lovely, congratulations on your win in my contest _Constance
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Date: 5/5/2020 7:48:00 AM
Such beauty, Eve! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/4/2020 9:48:00 PM
Wonderful line about 'meadow of blue' - congratulations on your placement, Eve!
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Date: 5/4/2020 4:31:00 PM
Eve, I found so much peace and serenity in these words. Thank you for the lovely walk through nature, and congrats on your #1 win. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 5/4/2020 11:57:00 AM
A lovely poem Eve, congrats. :)
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Date: 5/1/2020 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was filled with beauty. Enjoy your win and weekend............
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Date: 5/1/2020 5:10:00 AM
Eve, that fourth stanza is spellbinding. Never have seen it written before, yet we all have experienced it. Really quite a literary find. To write something never written before. Just think of it. All the muses and the millions of lines. This should have been placed higher. Oh well, so it goes. Poetic hugs.
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Date: 4/30/2020 10:42:00 PM
Such a delicate picture of a springtime experince, Eve. Lovely the phrasing and meter. Good luck in the contest. Prayers and hugs!
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Date: 4/30/2020 8:40:00 PM
you bring the scene to life beautifully Eve... I love nature and adore your poem, congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Date: 4/28/2020 11:47:00 AM
This is lovely, a meditative read, thank you Eve! xomo
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Date: 4/28/2020 9:14:00 AM
Good morning Eve, Sweet blossoms in bloom to find today, those 'flowerbed beauties' in your blue meadow. Stir for the senses. -Richard
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Date: 4/28/2020 7:29:00 AM
I especially love your title which sets the mood for the whole piece. Lovely imagery and a very peaceful read. ' Good Luck Eve xxoo
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