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Leaves Fall

Humming background Of an autumn Love serenade Mimicking the last dance Of older butterflies Their waltz for all to see Escorted by the wind In a grand finale Till gently gliding To the ground Fall leaves find Their final resting place Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~BYGONE DAYS OF SUMMER~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on January 20, 2019 for CONTEST 545 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on March 14, 2018

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Date: 1/22/2019 11:40:00 PM
Awww Wonderful! Congrats
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2019 4:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/15/2018 10:08:00 PM
Excellent extended image/metaphor, making this a gentle, exquisite piece of poetry. Bravo! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/15/2018 10:21:00 PM
Most appreciated, Gershon. Thank you so much.
Date: 3/14/2018 6:00:00 PM
You've penned a wonderful image :)
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Date: 3/14/2018 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/14/2018 4:38:00 PM
:) A final resting place....that is a serene ending to this lovely poem, Line. Loved the imagery ....butterflies dancing.
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Date: 3/14/2018 5:41:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment, Eileen. I got tired of thinking about winter and spring.

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