Leaves

Leaves
Falling
All around
A pretty show
Floating in the air
Landing places
Together
With more
Leaves


Heidi Sands

10/5/23

POTD 10/6/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Legros Kelley Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 2:01 PM
The gathering together of the leaves, beautiful! It painted an amazing picture in my heart. Congratulations, I see you were blessed with a POTD!! It was well deserved!
Sands Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 12:13 PM
Thank you so much BJ. I hope you are well :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Joyful!
Sands Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 6:27 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Proxenos Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:05 AM
A true picture of Autumn Heidi in fact i can visualize it happening. Hope you are keeping well my friend. Hugs an blessings, Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Thank you Jennifer. It is very chaotic. But, I am ok :)
Bangalee Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 11:49 PM
nicely formed the imagery by ninettee; nice to read and imagine; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
Sands Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Thank you :)
Sharma  Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 10:16 PM
Coming back with a heartiest congratulations for the POTD, this ninette is really gorgeous~ sending love :)
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Thank you very much Hiya :)
Messina Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 6:01 PM
The beauty of autumn...leaves of color. Very nice ninette, Hiedi.
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 8:02 PM
Thank you Charlie :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Very interesting form, nice poem Heidi, congrats on potd!
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 8:00 PM
Thanks John. I am busy with a lot going on and not here as much as usual, but wi
Brotherton Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Congrats Heidi on POTD. A clever Ninette about falling leaves.
Sands Avatar
October 14, 2023 at 7:59 PM
Thank you Jerry. I am in a hectic time for s while, but will check in as I can. I hope you are well :)
Theraven Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:48 PM
Heidi, Aware of the traces of falling leaves, your senses left behind. Though the colors may fade, of course they will, they must. Except in love's bright memory. -Richard
Sands Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Thank you Richard
Downing  Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Heidi. Beautiful:)
Sands Avatar
October 7, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Thank you Akkina
Nicole Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:01 PM
As vibrant colors collide, leaves create a breathtaking show, while twirling upon the ground. It's such a beautiful, yet festive moment to behold. Congratulations Heidi, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Thank you for your beautiful comment :)
Roper Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 5:29 PM
Congratulations on POTD my friend
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Thank you Eve :)
Poet Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Heidi, with this lovely poem.
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:59 PM
Thank you Sotto :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 12:05 PM
The start of my favourite season Heidi, congratulations to to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:59 PM
Thank you so much Tom :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:55 AM
Hello Heidi, the leaves have changed color and now they fall to the ground. Mother nature paints her leaves in pretty coors.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Hello Heidi, You are welcome. Have a great day. /Darlene/ Hugs.
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:59 PM
Yes my friend, thank you :)
Parker Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:39 AM
A delight worthy for POTD, HS! :-)
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Thank you Arlo :)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely Autumn write. Have a wonderful day/weekend with your win....................
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Thabk you Paula :)
Wolf Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:34 AM
Congrats on POTD, Heidi. I'll 'leave' others room for commenting as well. Cheers, gw
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Ok Gershon . Thank you my friend . I am leaving for now lol
Lawless Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:29 AM
there's nothing like "leaving" home to become part of nature's game of "follow the leader"....(now I gotta go figure out what a Ninette is) and attempt to write one as easily as this makes it look
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Thanks John. That is great! Enjoy writing the Ninette :)
Slaughter Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Lovely imagery, Heidi, and congrats on POTD.
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Thank you very much Jim :)
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 9:32 AM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Gina. Blessings :)
M  Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on POTD Heidi….Debx
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Deb :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:27 AM
Congratulations, Dear Heidi, on your POTD. Very beautiful descriptive Ninette, enjoyed the journey of autumn leaves.
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:58 AM
I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you :)
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:26 AM
What a lovely show Heidi! A quick look at Autumn. Congratulations on POTD! :)
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Linda :)
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October 6, 2023 at 6:59 AM
Congratulations Heidi on receiving poem of the day for this lovely Ninette… Belle
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Thank you Belle :)
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