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Hola, I am Ram mehta,
I am going out to say adios to the land,                  
Where cars are houses,
And houses are storehouses.

I am going out to say adios to the land,
Where boy friends are easily available,
But batteries not included.

I am going out to say adios to the land
Where the girls are looking for the fun,
But batteries to be recharged.

I am going out to say adios to the land,
Where a son is enamoured of his own mother
And daughter seeks her own father in bed.

I am going out to say goodbye to the land,
An unmarried girl wants a child,
Her mother takes her to the city to get pregnant,
Like a shepherd takes the cows to a bull.

Please leave your message,
I shall get back to you

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August 6, 2014
Form: Free verse
First Place win
Contest: I'll be back byVicky

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Date: 2/7/2021 7:19:00 AM
I am grateful this poem is being featured! Otherwise, I would have missed these expressive "Words-of-Art". Humanely honored _ ***Niyna (Ne-Ya-Nah).
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Date: 8/17/2014 1:15:00 AM
I think many people would like to say goodbye to this land that we live in today.... Your words send a powerful and very real message that all of us can agree with.... Great work, Dr. Ram! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/15/2014 10:21:00 AM
Very powerful piece, I tink it is one of your best, congratulations and added to my list of favorites.
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Date: 8/14/2014 9:17:00 PM
Some hard images, disturbing truths. Lets get back to the way life should be. Great win my friend
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Date: 8/14/2014 8:33:00 AM
A thoughtful write. Got me thinking! So.....you'll won't be back?
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Date: 8/14/2014 5:44:00 AM
A very unique write Dr Ram ! congrats on huge win!
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Date: 8/13/2014 9:03:00 AM
Dr. Ram, this is a very bold write. A value based society is what civilization needs to aim at for humanity's progress. congrats for a fine win. Mohan
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Date: 12/7/2012 9:37:00 PM
good ending...pd
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:04:00 PM
Unique and very unusual. Thank you also for reading my poetry and posting comments. You are talented.
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