Leave You My Tears But I'Ll Need Them Back By Next Week

Leave you my tears? I didn't. I took down the 'For Sale' sign. Threw in the white flag. Embalmed it like a stiff in a fridge. Sealed it with a musical lick. Packaged it with airplane black box tape. I hid it it’s sitting with Hoffa. Finished, over, took its last bow, curtains closed. I wrapped it in wire barbed! This heart of mine.
Maurice Yvonne September 7 2014 Poetry II Contest Sponsor: gautami phookan "Leave you my tears"

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Date: 11/1/2014 11:36:00 PM
wow, wrapped it in barbed wire too. This is GREAT hyperbole, my friend. I do believe it is the only one on your current page of poetry that i had not yet seen. All the others of yours I plan to visit later are on your first page (maybe it is called page two I guess). I will be very sure I have seen all your poems on your current page. Pretty sure right now that I have! Well, unlock your heart!! You deserve nothing but joy.
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Date: 9/9/2014 7:50:00 AM
The title is cute. .:) thanks for teaching me some new words..:) love the line where you use the word airplane..:) cute!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/9/2014 10:55:00 PM
thank you olive.
Date: 9/8/2014 4:03:00 PM
Dang...you keep fooling me....you changed the title..lol...I though I had missed one....well it's still good...it is aging just like a fine wine
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/8/2014 4:27:00 PM
sure enough. i tweak the titles until i think they are just stupid enough.
Date: 9/8/2014 10:43:00 AM
I'm here with some wire clippers Maurice! Brilliantly penned with great imagery good luck in the contest - hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2014 11:16:00 AM
Oh sorry Maurice I would have gladly kept you company but that 4 letter word got in the way ...WORK :-( Am looking forward to being immortalised in a poem written by you - wow sounds great :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/8/2014 11:02:00 AM
Oh Jan. I have been so lonely this morning. Glad you dropped by. I am working on a poem about Tim, Cas, Jan (also known as you) and Me (also known as Maurice).
Date: 9/8/2014 9:16:00 AM
Very sad write-good luck in the contest. :-)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/8/2014 8:41:00 PM
Sad, yes. Luckily though it is not about me. Thank you for your support.
Date: 9/7/2014 11:02:00 PM
Too bad its stronger than all that...I wish you luck....cheers
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/7/2014 11:16:00 PM
I've been weighing Cas down for months :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/7/2014 11:15:00 PM
do you really want to weight yourself down like that. you are at least ten times the writer i am.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/7/2014 11:12:00 PM
Sounds good...we could write it together
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/7/2014 11:11:00 PM
wow great comment Tim very poetic. i think you may have yourself a write there something in the vane of "too bad my heart is stronger than all that"
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