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wrote this  years after I was in a serious car accident and much younger but thought it had some good thoughts about dealing with death, this was also around the time that I had some very good friends dying from AIDS in  San Francisco. Things have changed thank goodness. improved it a bit but not much. the difference between 38 and 69.

Leave Me Now

Leave Me Now 
Always leaning against the sycamore 
Where leaves and shadows play upon your face 
Standing solitary in evening's softened light 
You touched me once 
In the midst of siren sounds and steel 
You summoned and I refused your darkness 
Yet your breath brushed my face gently
And your presence promised a quiet peace 
Since then I have seen you 
Near a friend's thinning frame 
Heard you gently tap on hospice windows 
Whispering do not stay to bear the pain 
Yes, a time will come when I long for you 
But you must me leave now--go away
I am too young to feel your heavy certainty
I wish to walk free and feel light again 
To watch the newly born leaves open and dance 
In summer's sun and jasmine's sweet perfume
Copyright © Linda Milgate | Year Posted 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/10/2021 6:17:00 AM
Beautiful and sad, so well expressed.hugs Rick.
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Date: 4/9/2021 5:56:00 AM
Absolutely marvelous, Linda!
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Date: 4/9/2021 1:57:00 AM
So deep the pain but one day you will be freer that the mighty eagle, flying over mighty clouds. Hope to hear from you.
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Date: 4/8/2021 8:08:00 PM
Wow! A beautiful and profound write! So glad I stopped by to read! Blessings, Kim M
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Linda Milgate
Date: 4/8/2021 8:25:00 PM
thank you, read it again and improved a little but brings back memories and future thoughts
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