Barbara Gorelick Poet Light Verse

Learning To Ride..Footle-Mania

‘ Lil tyke
 New Bike
                                                                
Big deal 
Two wheel 
                                                           
A crash                                                                                                                         
Road rash
                 

Don't cry
Re-try

He rides
with pride!

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 11, 2009 at 4:49 PM Barbara, Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire April 9, 2009 at 6:23 PM Dear Barbara, My Barbeeg Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's April Footle Contest I think I said YOU would Win Great POEM LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

Carolyn Devonshire March 18, 2009 at 3:54 PM Very sweet, Barbara! Love the reference to "road rash." Carolyn

Brandee Augustus March 16, 2009 at 1:24 PM Lovely poem. Great write.

Sean Kelly March 16, 2009 at 3:05 AM Need More .... Still Sore ... Ride & write onnnnnn , Barbara .....

Laurie Ginn March 15, 2009 at 6:23 PM One of my favs...love it

Lena Townsend March 15, 2009 at 6:08 PM Cute! Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest! Smiles from Lolita

Robin L. Gass March 15, 2009 at 3:41 PM Congratulations on your win in Brians contest! This is adorable! Great job! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter March 15, 2009 at 1:17 PM YAY Barbara! Warmest congrats on your excellent win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar

March 15, 2009 at 1:13 PM Got a chuckle out of this one. I remember those days. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the footle contest. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards March 15, 2009 at 11:41 AM Great job, I saw this earlier with a smile, glad to see it among the winning poems! Congratulations!! ~ love, Carrie

Amy Swanson March 15, 2009 at 10:53 AM This is adorable! Footle-mania is right! haha I loved this. :) Congrats on your win in Mr. Strand's footle contest! Love, Amy

Brian Strand March 15, 2009 at 10:19 AM Congrats on your success in my footle contest BG Rgds Brian

Arany P. March 8, 2009 at 6:24 AM well done!! nicely used the form!! ~ Arany

Brian Strand March 8, 2009 at 12:16 AM Thank you for supporting my contest BG Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards March 7, 2009 at 7:29 PM How cute is this...multiple footles!! Great job!! ~ Carrie

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 7, 2009 at 6:06 PM Dear Barbara, this is a winner Wish I'd learn to ride a bike after my crash Good Luck LOVE ALWAYS Xliamp...HG

Laurie Ginn March 7, 2009 at 5:52 PM Oh Barbara does it bring back memories both learning and teaching...something we probably all share. Good stuff.

March 7, 2009 at 1:59 PM Nice series! Put a smile on my face. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Sharon Winter March 7, 2009 at 1:39 PM This is precious! Great job with all! Love, Shar

Sean Kelly March 7, 2009 at 12:52 PM Ride Onnnnn ..... He's Gone !! .... Now where are those stableizers ??? ..

Laura Mckenzie March 7, 2009 at 11:23 AM Barbara this is a wonderful and clever set of footles great job! Laura :)

Michael Jordan March 7, 2009 at 10:07 AM Barbara this Footie series is simply excellent - Wonderful job on this - God Bless, MJ