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Learning To Ride..Footle-Mania

‘ Lil tyke
 New Bike
                                                                
Big deal 
Two wheel 
                                                           
A crash                                                                                                                         
Road rash
                 

Don't cry
Re-try

He rides
with pride!

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2009

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 4/11/2009 4:49:00 PM Barbara, Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest. Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 4/9/2009 6:23:00 PM Dear Barbara, My Barbeeg Congratulations on YOUR Honorable Mention in Brian's April Footle Contest I think I said YOU would Win Great POEM LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/18/2009 3:54:00 PM Very sweet, Barbara! Love the reference to "road rash." Carolyn Login to Reply

Brandee Augustus Date: 3/16/2009 1:24:00 PM Lovely poem. Great write. Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 3/16/2009 3:05:00 AM Need More .... Still Sore ... Ride & write onnnnnn , Barbara ..... Login to Reply

Laurie Ginn Date: 3/15/2009 6:23:00 PM One of my favs...love it Login to Reply

Lena Townsend Date: 3/15/2009 6:08:00 PM Cute! Congratulations on your win in Brian's Contest! Smiles from Lolita Login to Reply

Robin L. Gass Date: 3/15/2009 3:41:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Brians contest! This is adorable! Great job! Love, Robin Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 3/15/2009 1:17:00 PM YAY Barbara! Warmest congrats on your excellent win in Brian's contest! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Date: 3/15/2009 1:13:00 PM Got a chuckle out of this one. I remember those days. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the footle contest. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/15/2009 11:41:00 AM Great job, I saw this earlier with a smile, glad to see it among the winning poems! Congratulations!! ~ love, Carrie Login to Reply

Amy Swanson Date: 3/15/2009 10:53:00 AM This is adorable! Footle-mania is right! haha I loved this. :) Congrats on your win in Mr. Strand's footle contest! Love, Amy Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 3/15/2009 10:19:00 AM Congrats on your success in my footle contest BG Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Arany P. Date: 3/8/2009 6:24:00 AM well done!! nicely used the form!! ~ Arany Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 3/8/2009 12:16:00 AM Thank you for supporting my contest BG Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/7/2009 7:29:00 PM How cute is this...multiple footles!! Great job!! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Date: 3/7/2009 6:06:00 PM Dear Barbara, this is a winner Wish I'd learn to ride a bike after my crash Good Luck LOVE ALWAYS Xliamp...HG Login to Reply

Laurie Ginn Date: 3/7/2009 5:52:00 PM Oh Barbara does it bring back memories both learning and teaching...something we probably all share. Good stuff. Login to Reply

Date: 3/7/2009 1:59:00 PM Nice series! Put a smile on my face. Thank you for sharing it. Karen Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 3/7/2009 1:39:00 PM This is precious! Great job with all! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 3/7/2009 12:52:00 PM Ride Onnnnn ..... He's Gone !! .... Now where are those stableizers ??? .. Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 3/7/2009 11:23:00 AM Barbara this is a wonderful and clever set of footles great job! Laura :) Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 3/7/2009 10:07:00 AM Barbara this Footie series is simply excellent - Wonderful job on this - God Bless, MJ Login to Reply