Leaf

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4/28/2025 for Micro Poem Poetry Contest sponsored by Ink Empress

my sisters and brothers came, one by one green joined the wind-dance and, in turn departed brown

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:54:00 AM

Dear david, how youv personified and written on that shows browning of leaves and passing so well here in the end, is unique! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light

David Crandall
Date: 5/8/2025 8:51:00 AM

Thanks Ink. It was a pleasure!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great micro poem, David :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 5/8/2025 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2025 10:32:00 AM

- My first attempt was "Leaf", David ... but I ended up on an island :))) - I like your entry :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 4/28/2025 12:52:00 PM

haha - I thought of island, but changed my mind - good luck :-)