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Lazy Sun

Dawn breaks, With a filmy twist; As Mr Sun, cries to the chirping birdies, "Five more minutes...please!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/14/2011 1:16:00 PM
*smiles* I'm going to have to keep tabs on you dear poet...I love your writes thus far ! Have a blessed one....much love, james
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Date: 7/10/2011 10:24:00 AM
This is brilliant !Liked it very much...thanks for your comments at my pages.But the form of this poem is not Limerick.Please click on the word Limerick to check the form from this page.
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:40:00 AM
oh, I LOVE this. I love the sun and how cute to imagine him personified this way!! great poem!!!
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:42:00 AM
Glad u liked it.. thanks a lotttt.... :)