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Lazy Summer Days

ANACREONTIC VERSE In the blazing heat of summer days, I find swimming holes and fishing poles a lazy river where I drift tubing with a chest of cold beer not caring where the current takes me until hunger calls eating burgers grilled at the lake homemade ice cream freshly churned I have learned the best ways to enjoy summer in days of heat is to be lazy with something sweet Summer nights somewhat cooler heat tempered by soft breezes they exist but not often found time for vacation in the snow somewhere it's cool that's where I'll go 7/22/2016 Anacreontic Verse Contest Edward Ebbs

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Date: 9/29/2016 8:57:00 PM
just lovely Marti! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/30/2016 1:24:00 AM
Very frank write, Marti:) Congratulations on top win:)well deserved:)
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Date: 8/28/2016 10:53:00 PM
A great poem and win. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 8/27/2016 12:02:00 PM
Nice win Marti, congratulations
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Date: 8/27/2016 9:36:00 AM
Congrats !!!! Sara
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Date: 8/27/2016 5:49:00 AM
woohoooo Many congrats Marti so lovely to see you at the top of the podium:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2016 2:59:00 AM
Marti...a lovely winning entry with a deserving first place win! Congratulations! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/26/2016 10:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Marti.
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Date: 8/26/2016 9:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nicely done :)
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Date: 7/23/2016 10:02:00 AM
Love this one, Marti. Want to see the poems you told me about but not sure where to look. I am dying for my breakfast now. haha. Let me see a few more first.
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Date: 7/22/2016 6:51:00 PM
A nice summer song. Im really not a fan of this form. It doesn't seem to bring anything extra to the poem...just my two cents.
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Date: 7/22/2016 9:38:00 AM
Great write Marti, nice to see you getting the recognition you deserve, all of our views are down it's those lazy summers days, as you say most on vacation.
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:29:00 AM
Lovely imagery and a beautiful flow to your verse Marti - I must poem mine today:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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