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Lazy Days

Summertime coats your tongue like molasses Lingering kiss of strawberry lasses Sipping lemonade Beneath pastel shade Bare toes wriggle in beach-salty grasses 6/06/20 For 'Summer Laziness' contest Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 6/22/2020 1:03:00 AM
This is wonderfully penned. Witty and amusing at the same time. Congratulations on your win Michelle :)
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Date: 6/21/2020 1:26:00 PM
I'll "pass" on the beach bit, but the rest sounds good to me. Congrats on the contest, as well.
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Date: 6/19/2020 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Cute" I would love some of your lemonade with my toes at the beach. Enjoy your win, day and weekend.............
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Date: 6/18/2020 8:23:00 PM
Michelle, a very sweet limerick conveying the summer laziness.last line conveyed so many meanings. Very clever. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.
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Date: 6/11/2020 5:11:00 AM
A delicious poem. Mine was more malicious :0 Love this, Michelle!
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Date: 6/9/2020 7:08:00 AM
wow, so cute! I love this short poem To my faves. Thank you dear poet Michelle.
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Date: 6/8/2020 6:04:00 PM
Ah yes, beautiful imagery.
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Date: 6/8/2020 4:02:00 AM
There's nothing quite like lazing at the beach in summer. Enjoyed this very much, Michelle ~ John
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Date: 6/7/2020 1:09:00 PM
Enchanting image there. Seems so out of reach these days (except in my mind). Very nicely etched, Michelle. :) gw
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Date: 6/6/2020 10:38:00 PM
Limerick....marvelously crafted! Thanks for sharing, Michelle.
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Date: 6/6/2020 8:42:00 PM
Oh yummy poem!!!! I was hooked by the first line. xomo
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Date: 6/6/2020 3:45:00 PM
Charming limerick, Michelle! Janice
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Date: 6/6/2020 3:43:00 PM
Can just picture the scene, bliss. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 6/6/2020 2:46:00 PM
B-4 lockdown! Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/6/2020 2:56:00 PM
Yes I hope we can get to the beach before Labor Day!