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Lazy Days

Summertime coats your tongue like molasses
Lingering kiss of strawberry lasses
Sipping lemonade
Beneath pastel shade
Bare toes wriggle in beach-salty grasses

6/06/20

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Paula Goldsmith

June 3, 2021 at 9:52 AM

Back with Congratulations on this win. Lemonade and the beach sound heavenly. May you be blessed...............

Christuraj Alex

June 2, 2021 at 10:51 AM

Beautiful Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

June 2, 2021 at 9:56 AM

Thanks for taking me on a summer vacation, Michelle. Your imagery is so vivid I am right there with you in the "pastel shade!" Congratulations on your win! This is utterly delightful!

Aditi Mishra

June 22, 2020 at 1:03 AM

This is wonderfully penned. Witty and amusing at the same time. Congratulations on your win Michelle :)

Paula Goldsmith

June 19, 2020 at 11:08 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Cute" I would love some of your lemonade with my toes at the beach. Enjoy your win, day and weekend.............

Mohan Chutani

June 18, 2020 at 8:23 PM

Michelle, a very sweet limerick conveying the summer laziness.last line conveyed so many meanings. Very clever. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.