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Lazy Days

Summertime coats your tongue like molasses Lingering kiss of strawberry lasses Sipping lemonade Beneath pastel shade Bare toes wriggle in beach-salty grasses 6/06/20

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2021 9:52:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on this win. Lemonade and the beach sound heavenly. May you be blessed...............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/2/2021 10:51:00 AM

Beautiful Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/2/2021 9:56:00 AM

Thanks for taking me on a summer vacation, Michelle. Your imagery is so vivid I am right there with you in the "pastel shade!" Congratulations on your win! This is utterly delightful!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 1:03:00 AM

This is wonderfully penned. Witty and amusing at the same time. Congratulations on your win Michelle :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/19/2020 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Cute" I would love some of your lemonade with my toes at the beach. Enjoy your win, day and weekend.............

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/18/2020 8:23:00 PM

Michelle, a very sweet limerick conveying the summer laziness.last line conveyed so many meanings. Very clever. Congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan.