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Lazy Day

The water was dark and brown, two turtles rested on a nearby log soaking in the sun. A large grey heron swooped lazily down landing effortlessly while looking around for a tasty morsel treat. Overhead a squawking jay served as sentinel to warn of my intrusion into its domain. All I wanted was to sit and dip a line into the cool brown pool. Perhaps an unsuspecting fish would seek the dangling worm on the end of my line. Even if there were no takers I wouldn't mind. It just was a chance to visit the calm and quiet of that dark and cool pool as it just drifted by. Thoughts of nothingness clouded an otherwise empty mind. It was just a lazy day, warm and friendly sitting by that dark and brown pool with a drifting line. Cares drifted away like the white fluffy clouds high above. So why spoil a beautiful day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/11/2013 8:52:00 AM
This is a creative and imaginative write. The imagery takes the reader on a journey of a peaceful, restful day nice job
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Date: 12/6/2011 12:45:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Richard. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:01:00 PM
Lovely Richard, I feel the heat and laziness of the day. Your descriptions are perfect.
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:44:00 AM
This was awesome my daughter likes turtles and I love herons.. Cory
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