Lazy Afternoon In Three Forms

Lazy afternoon snuggled within your embrace love is in the air Soft whispers we share of the years that have gone by. memories drift in, of all the fun we have had while raising our two children. Then soft, we drift to sleep on kisses, contented sighs. no other poetry scene compares to this time
Paula Swanson For the contest Fun and Frolic Senryu Tanka Dodoitso sponsored by Linda Marie Placement: 5th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 7:47 PM
Paula, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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June 10, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Congrats Paula on your delightful win in this contest of Linda's..love,gautami
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June 9, 2011 at 2:30 PM
Congrats on this passionate work..Sara
Horne Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Paula : )
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Paula. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Paula
Sweetheart Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Congrats Paula on your fifth place win in my contest luv..
Kriticos Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 10:54 AM
A warm and well written poem, my friend. Good job
Richards Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 7:47 AM
So much heartfelt love in all three forms....love the gentle affection each one holds. Good luck, Paula!!
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May 21, 2011 at 5:17 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Paula and good luck ... know your lines will amaze me as I read fully at judging time.. hope u will join in my fun birthday celebration for the rest of this day .. am being so spoiled and pampered so think I must keep this Ron fella..luv.. thankxxx..
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