Lazy Afternoon In Three Forms

Lazy afternoon snuggled within your embrace love is in the air Soft whispers we share of the years that have gone by. memories drift in, of all the fun we have had while raising our two children. Then soft, we drift to sleep on kisses, contented sighs. no other poetry scene compares to this time
Paula Swanson For the contest Fun and Frolic Senryu Tanka Dodoitso sponsored by Linda Marie Placement: 5th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/13/2011 7:47:00 PM
Paula, Great to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your delightful win in this contest of Linda's..love,gautami
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Date: 6/9/2011 2:30:00 PM
Congrats on this passionate work..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:26:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win, Paula : )
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Fun and Frolic" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Paula
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:09:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your fifth place win in my contest luv..
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Date: 5/30/2011 10:54:00 AM
A warm and well written poem, my friend. Good job
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:47:00 AM
So much heartfelt love in all three forms....love the gentle affection each one holds. Good luck, Paula!!
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Date: 5/21/2011 5:17:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Paula and good luck ... know your lines will amaze me as I read fully at judging time.. hope u will join in my fun birthday celebration for the rest of this day .. am being so spoiled and pampered so think I must keep this Ron fella..luv.. thankxxx..
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