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Laying

laying awake absent moon at my window

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/20/2018 11:33:00 PM
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This one takes me back to 1963 laying by my open widow in Florida. We had no air and it was HOT. I was terrified by all the creepy sounds out there. What power your seven words have! Thanks for the memory. Made me think of my mom. Thank you so much.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/21/2018 12:21:00 AM
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What a lovely compliment, Timothy. Thank you so much.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/20/2018 6:41:00 PM
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this one is very senryu! Love it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/20/2018 9:03:00 PM
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Thanks for your lovely visit, Andrea.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/20/2018 12:12:00 AM
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I am pondering this one, trying to imagine the scene.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/20/2018 9:03:00 PM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

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