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Lawnmower Blues

Hollow herbage grows. Lifting spear shaped blades skyward. Trim necessity!

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/10/2009 6:39:00 PM

love it, the summer time pain!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/9/2009 3:33:00 PM

Haiku as alliteration! Well done, Marty! And thanks for your comment...Gert

Danny Nunn

Date: 10/9/2009 2:00:00 PM

Hi Martin...my idea of a lawn mower is a herd of cattle, but you have a great write here. Thanks for your words on Rattle snakes? I do not have any more snake poems, but do have some little lawyer zingers...snakes, lawyers one in the same? Have a good weekend...Danny

Date: 10/9/2009 12:39:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration. What an enjoyable poem. Creative imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2009 11:48:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Martin. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/8/2009 4:21:00 PM

Nice work, nice imagery. I left you some soup mail...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2009 10:46:00 AM

Many say the same so your Haiku speaks to them. Keep writing. Sara