Lawnmower Blues

Hollow herbage grows.
Lifting spear shaped blades skyward.
Trim necessity!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 6:39 PM
love it, the summer time pain!
Knop Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 3:33 PM
Haiku as alliteration! Well done, Marty! And thanks for your comment...Gert
Nunn Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Hi Martin...my idea of a lawn mower is a herd of cattle, but you have a great write here. Thanks for your words on Rattle snakes? I do not have any more snake poems, but do have some little lawyer zingers...snakes, lawyers one in the same? Have a good weekend...Danny
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October 9, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Nice use of alliteration. What an enjoyable poem. Creative imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen
Brown Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 11:48 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Martin. I hope you have a wonderful fun filled weekend. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 4:21 PM
Nice work, nice imagery. I left you some soup mail...Raul
Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2009 at 10:46 AM
Many say the same so your Haiku speaks to them. Keep writing. Sara
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