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Lavender Rain

Breezes WHISPER in the trees after cleansing rain; FRAGRANCE of Wisteria WAFTS following rain Thoughts of my love's LILTING bass voice WAFTING brings BLISS, As FRAGRANT Wisteria comes with flowing rain As SPLENDOR of sun peeking from behind a cloud; The bright glow and warmth is as TRANQUILIZING rain DULCET sun melts cares better than TRANQUILIZER___ Better even after a spring soft washing rain ELOQUENCE of my love's romantic poems soothes the heart, SUNFLOWER listens through LAVENDER flowing rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/29/2010 4:30:00 AM
I love it makes me want it to rain
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Date: 4/19/2010 5:16:00 AM
Congrats Sara, melted my cares a lil
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 9:11:00 PM
Sara, I really like this one and so happy to see it in the winner's circle. Congratulations to you. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:09:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your HM in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and nice use of her beautiful words..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:44:00 AM
congratulations on your win. Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:22:00 AM
Great writing, Sara, and congratulations for your HM in my first poetry contest here. I appreciate your participation. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/12/2010 4:15:00 PM
Good job- I have such trouble with Ghazal, but your a natural Smiles
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Date: 4/11/2010 11:09:00 PM
Best of luck in the contest and great use of the form...Raul
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:59:00 PM
Goodluck in the contest.I enjoyed ... Lavender flowing rain
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Date: 4/11/2010 8:20:00 PM
hope for the best of you. it's beautiful. it's not much of a surprise of such beauty coming from a beatiful & great poet of imagery. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:22:00 PM
Ghazals are difficult alone, but to use the 10 assigned words, a greater accomplishment. Lovely job! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/11/2010 5:08:00 PM
enjoyed mom--god job!!
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Date: 4/11/2010 4:44:00 PM
very pretty!
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:58:00 PM
very nice good luck in the contest you made this look so easy I am still working on mine good job well done faleshia
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Date: 4/11/2010 1:19:00 PM
Another wonderful contest entry Sara and great use of Andrea's words in your Ghazal poem.. u have challenged yourself to the max with this one and it turned out most beautifully...good luck ...luv.. Linda-Marie
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