Sara Kendrick Poet Ghazal

Lavender Rain

Breezes WHISPER in the trees after cleansing rain;
FRAGRANCE of Wisteria WAFTS following rain

Thoughts of my love's LILTING bass voice WAFTING brings BLISS,
As FRAGRANT Wisteria comes with flowing rain

As SPLENDOR of sun peeking from behind a cloud;
The bright glow and warmth is as TRANQUILIZING rain

DULCET sun melts cares better than TRANQUILIZER___
Better even after a spring soft washing rain

ELOQUENCE of my love's romantic poems soothes the heart,
SUNFLOWER listens through LAVENDER flowing rain.

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Shay Funk April 29, 2010 at 4:30 AM I love it makes me want it to rain

Mitch White April 19, 2010 at 5:16 AM Congrats Sara, melted my cares a lil

Carol Sunshine Brown April 19, 2010 at 2:19 AM Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Sara. Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2010 at 9:11 PM Sara, I really like this one and so happy to see it in the winner's circle. Congratulations to you. Blessings, Connie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 18, 2010 at 8:09 AM Congrats Sara on your HM in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and nice use of her beautiful words..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Joyce Johnson April 18, 2010 at 7:44 AM congratulations on your win. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2010 at 1:22 AM Great writing, Sara, and congratulations for your HM in my first poetry contest here. I appreciate your participation. LUv, andrea

Mitch White April 12, 2010 at 4:15 PM Good job- I have such trouble with Ghazal, but your a natural Smiles

Raul Moreno April 11, 2010 at 11:09 PM Best of luck in the contest and great use of the form...Raul

Dr.Ram Mehta April 11, 2010 at 8:59 PM Goodluck in the contest.I enjoyed ... Lavender flowing rain

Lynette Chachere April 11, 2010 at 8:20 PM hope for the best of you. it's beautiful. it's not much of a surprise of such beauty coming from a beatiful & great poet of imagery. -Always&Forever Lynette

Carrie Richards April 11, 2010 at 7:22 PM Ghazals are difficult alone, but to use the 10 assigned words, a greater accomplishment. Lovely job! Love, Carrie

Doris Culverhouse April 11, 2010 at 5:08 PM enjoyed mom--god job!!

David Byrne April 11, 2010 at 4:44 PM very pretty!

Faleshia Murphy April 11, 2010 at 1:58 PM very nice good luck in the contest you made this look so easy I am still working on mine good job well done faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 11, 2010 at 1:19 PM Another wonderful contest entry Sara and great use of Andrea's words in your Ghazal poem.. u have challenged yourself to the max with this one and it turned out most beautifully...good luck ...luv.. Linda-Marie