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Laughter Minichu

may laughter be our trance therein ego disappears since there’s no one here carefree dance shift to the heart time dissolves, banishing each fear zen art soul kiss feel love draw near bliss may laughter be our trance time dissolves, banishing each fear bliss

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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/15/2023 7:52:00 AM
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Congratulations on your placement US! " therein ego disappears since there’s no one here" refreshing concept!
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/15/2023 6:40:00 PM
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Thank you, Anaya :) sans identity, what remains, is awareness self-aware. We are that but to know, we must so become.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/14/2023 6:47:00 AM
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Laughter is such a great gift! Nicely done! Congratulations! :)
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/14/2023 7:07:00 AM
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Thank you, Linda :)
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 9/14/2023 5:57:00 AM
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US, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/14/2023 7:07:00 AM
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Thank you!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2023 10:22:00 AM
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A creative/fun write. A fun read. Have a great day.............
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/23/2023 8:17:00 PM
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Thank you, dear Paula
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Jay Narain
Date: 8/23/2023 9:57:00 AM
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Nicely penned Minichu.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/23/2023 8:17:00 PM
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Thank you, Jay
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/22/2023 9:45:00 PM
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This is an excellent Minichu, Seeker.
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Lin Lane
Date: 8/23/2023 5:02:00 AM
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It’s very challenging with so few words allowed to enable it to be cohesive. Often, I feel words are left dangling.
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/22/2023 10:21:00 PM
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Thank you, Lin. I’ve found this compact form needs a bit of work actually, if it has to be presented as a cohesive whole.

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