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Laughter Minichu

may laughter be our trance
therein ego disappears since there’s no one here
carefree dance

shift to the heart
time dissolves, banishing each fear
zen art

soul kiss
feel love draw near
bliss

may laughter be our trance 
time dissolves, banishing each fear
bliss

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I Am Anaya Date: 9/15/2023 7:52:00 AM Congratulations on your placement US! " therein ego disappears since there’s no one here" refreshing concept! Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/15/2023 6:40:00 PM Thank you, Anaya :) sans identity, what remains, is awareness self-aware. We are that but to know, we must so become.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/14/2023 6:47:00 AM Laughter is such a great gift! Nicely done! Congratulations! :) Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/14/2023 7:07:00 AM Thank you, Linda :)

Mohan Chutani Date: 9/14/2023 5:57:00 AM US, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 9/14/2023 7:07:00 AM Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/23/2023 10:22:00 AM A creative/fun write. A fun read. Have a great day............. Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/23/2023 8:17:00 PM Thank you, dear Paula

Jay Narain Date: 8/23/2023 9:57:00 AM Nicely penned Minichu. Login to Reply Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/23/2023 8:17:00 PM Thank you, Jay

Lin Lane Date: 8/22/2023 9:45:00 PM This is an excellent Minichu, Seeker. Login to Reply Lin Lane Date: 8/23/2023 5:02:00 AM It’s very challenging with so few words allowed to enable it to be cohesive. Often, I feel words are left dangling. Unseeking Seeker Date: 8/22/2023 10:21:00 PM Thank you, Lin. I’ve found this compact form needs a bit of work actually, if it has to be presented as a cohesive whole.