Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

Laughter Minichu

may laughter be our trance
therein ego disappears since there’s no one here
carefree dance

shift to the heart
time dissolves, banishing each fear
zen art

soul kiss
feel love draw near
bliss

may laughter be our trance 
time dissolves, banishing each fear
bliss

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I Am Anaya September 15, 2023 at 7:52 AM Congratulations on your placement US! " therein ego disappears since there’s no one here" refreshing concept! Unseeking Seeker September 15, 2023 at 6:40 PM Thank you, Anaya :) sans identity, what remains, is awareness self-aware. We are that but to know, we must so become.

Linda Alice Fowler September 14, 2023 at 6:47 AM Laughter is such a great gift! Nicely done! Congratulations! :) Unseeking Seeker September 14, 2023 at 7:07 AM Thank you, Linda :)

Mohan Chutani September 14, 2023 at 5:57 AM US, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan Unseeking Seeker September 14, 2023 at 7:07 AM Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith August 23, 2023 at 10:22 AM A creative/fun write. A fun read. Have a great day............. Unseeking Seeker August 23, 2023 at 8:17 PM Thank you, dear Paula

Jay Narain August 23, 2023 at 9:57 AM Nicely penned Minichu. Unseeking Seeker August 23, 2023 at 8:17 PM Thank you, Jay

Lin Lane August 22, 2023 at 9:45 PM This is an excellent Minichu, Seeker. Lin Lane August 23, 2023 at 5:02 AM It’s very challenging with so few words allowed to enable it to be cohesive. Often, I feel words are left dangling. Unseeking Seeker August 22, 2023 at 10:21 PM Thank you, Lin. I’ve found this compact form needs a bit of work actually, if it has to be presented as a cohesive whole.