Richard Lamoureux Poet Quatrain

Laughing Towards Ecstasy

I want to make you laugh
Till you're rolling on the floor
I won't be satisfied
Until you beg me for more

Passion mixed with laughter
Can truly be divine
No one else's fingers
Are anything like mine

They will fill you with pleasure
your heart can't help but race
You try to stop laughing
Tears stream down your face

Laughter becomes rapture
I know what you like best
I place my hands gently
A feather like caress

The rhythm becomes faster
My touch is more firm
No longer wanting laughter
With sweet passion you burn

Years we've been together
I still make you laugh every day
But in the end
This is my favorite way

Linda/ PD's make me laugh contest

Laughter with a twist.

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Eileen Manassian September 5, 2015 at 9:50 AM I remember this one...wanted to read it again. Laughter with a twist...Oh....what a sweet twist this is. :) Hugs Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2015 at 1:03 PM Thanks Eileen, I had forgotten about this little poem. Thanks for reading it.

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2014 at 5:15 PM Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Ralph Taylor March 20, 2013 at 3:15 PM Congrats, Richard. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Donna Jones March 20, 2013 at 9:58 AM Congrats Richard....knew it would be a winner...Donna

Connie Gildersleeve March 20, 2013 at 5:09 AM Nicely done Richard. Congratulations on your fine poem. Warm Smiles, Connie

Francine Roberts March 19, 2013 at 10:26 AM many congrats on your win in the contest Richard

Bukang Liwayway March 19, 2013 at 8:59 AM Wonderfully written poem my friend Richard.. Congratulations on your win on PD's Contest. Have a nice day always. Hugs, Maria

Painted Hunter March 19, 2013 at 6:11 AM Now I see why you titled it so...Congrats! Richard Lamoureux March 19, 2013 at 7:55 AM Thanks Caleb.

Tahera Mannan March 19, 2013 at 12:51 AM Many congrats for this ecstastic write and win. Richard Lamoureux March 19, 2013 at 7:55 AM Thanks Tahera

Carol Eastman March 18, 2013 at 9:36 PM Congratulations on the great win.

Poet Destroyer A March 18, 2013 at 6:31 PM Hi Richard, thanks for the chuckle and awesome poem.. always~ LINDA

Roy Jerden March 18, 2013 at 6:07 PM Ah, yes, Monsieur Lamoureax, AKA "The French Tickler". Magic fingers are the way! Congratulations on your win, Richard!

Delysia Hendricks March 11, 2013 at 7:17 AM The way to a woman's heart is through her funny bone. My kind of poet who can convey a profound message through jest. I love this poem and I'm sure Linda will too. My very best of luck to you in her contest, my friend :) Richard Lamoureux March 11, 2013 at 8:05 AM Thanks Delysia

Vicky Tsiluma March 10, 2013 at 11:14 PM Good one Richard! It feels wonderful to read such joyous work. Ability to make others laugh - now that's a special attribute. Nicely done! Richard Lamoureux March 11, 2013 at 6:54 AM Thanks Vicky

Donna Jones March 10, 2013 at 6:51 PM An entertaining write all the way...good luck in the contest.....Donna Richard Lamoureux March 11, 2013 at 8:06 AM Thanks Donna

Lucilla Carrillo March 10, 2013 at 2:16 PM This is good Richard and you will do great in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Richard Lamoureux March 10, 2013 at 5:11 PM Thanks Lucilla

Eileen Manassian March 10, 2013 at 10:49 AM WOW! What a great way to get there! She's a lucky lady! ;) Soup Mail! Richard Lamoureux March 10, 2013 at 5:12 PM I'm the lucky one. Thanks for the soup mail.