Laughing In the Yard

A lad is stopped by roving cops, who shoot in disregard.
His face is black, he’s on his back, a breeze is breathing hard,
He bleeds and dies, his mama cries, the screaming sky is scarred,
The sheriff and his squad at hand are laughing in the yard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cavanaugh Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 4:19 AM
Excellent poem. Your poems always have great rhyme and meter. And many like this have a biting biting message to be taken to heart. Great poem.
Gooden Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 8:32 AM
Sad tale, beautifully told.
Bennight Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 2:44 PM
I like it
St.Cross Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 10:38 PM
‡ Very Profound & Brushed In Over Sprays Historical Seemingly Endless Spattered Colours, Sweet Beautiful Terry * My Friend John Rhinem Once Posted A Poe Here At PoetrySoup Called, 'Blue Notes' * Hey, Wanna Share Some Drops ? Smile, Did I Ever Tell You, How Beautiful I Think You Are. * Shine Bright Bright Light, Luv, Rachel ‡
Jackson Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 3:52 AM
I want to say thank you for your comment on my Brown Skin poem....Your poem was powerful and it definitely present an issue that is current in our world.
Whitehead Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 6:47 AM
Oh dear!! You've brought home a subject which is being discussed at the moment and it seems that if you are young, black, on the street, and especially if you wear a hoodie - then you are a police target. I, on the other hand, old, white haired and middle class found a great deal of kindness by the police when my Morris Minor was tipped over in the road.
Brown Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 6:13 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Terry. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol
Caulfield Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 4:55 PM
This is such a sad poem. No one should laugh at someone else's calamity.
Collins Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 7:14 AM
Dear Terry, This hits hard and makes me sick. love, Kathy
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 1:42 AM
A tough piece, Terry... '...the screaming sky is scarred' is a fabulous phrase! BRAVO YOU!! Best wishes, Keith
Whitehead Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 3:24 PM
Yes, this is very hard too. What would the Moon fairies think about this? Oh dear!! You couldn't see such a thing from the moon.
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 11:50 AM
the hard truth so well scribed, terry.. i go for justice and equality... darn good piece!..:) hugggs!
Song Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 3:26 AM
Reminds me of so many sad news commentaries...I hate bigotry when it rears its ugly head...I really enjoyed your couplet rhyme, Terry. Appreciate u reading and commenting on my poetry too. U are a strong encourager...I say, "Let's clone you!" :) Gwendolen
Williams Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 1:27 AM
Terry, very well said...David
Hu Avatar
June 20, 2012 at 1:15 AM
Very sad but true.Hope we wil realize now that we all r same.Very wel written
Kearley Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:23 PM
You got me in the heart...
Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 8:21 PM
Terry, this sure is reflective of what used to be very common scenes from history. I really like what you covey in this poem and the title is powerful.
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