Lattice of Cloud

grey clouds weave lattice
of dark dusk on canopy…
wilted willow weeps

January 25, 2020
Contest : HI - KU
Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Hankins Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 10:44 AM
Nice haiku. Congrats on your placement in the contest!
Fowler Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 7:30 AM
Hi Subimal. This is a lovely write. Congratulations on the win! Linda
La France Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 3:53 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in Brian's H I - K U contest with this excellent haiku _Constance
Chamberlain Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 1:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 11:30 PM
This one seems like a real haiku style to me. Great job, subimal.
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Lovely imagery subimal:-) many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Neumann Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Nice one. Congratulations on your win, Kai
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 3:30 AM
- Congratulations on your great nature themed haiku, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Somadas Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 1:11 AM
wilted willow weeps.. I added a wow.. Great win..
Kitchin Avatar
January 28, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous haiku!
Adams Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:00 PM
beautifully penned... this one comes to life wonderfully... best wishes in the contest...
Kauffman Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 12:49 PM
This piece is very special with the imagery and alliteration woven together seamlessly.
Somadas Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:33 AM
Wow..amazing thought..Great entry in the contest..
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