Home » Poems » Sara Kendrick » Late Afternoon Sun

Late Afternoon Sun

late afternoon sun
shines through clouds orange aura...
summer's angles gone

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jack Horne

Date: 9/18/2012 8:22:00 AM

lovely haiku, my friend. Thanks very much - the contest was great fun : )

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/18/2012 6:58:00 AM

rain rain give us a drink.....enjoyed the sun and rain....Archie is in the hospital he has a respiratory infection and they are checking his heart also.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/18/2012 5:03:00 AM

this is lovely Sara,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2012 10:22:00 PM

that last line is so classy, Sara, it makes the haiku!

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/17/2012 2:44:00 PM

I'm trying to enjoy the last few days of summer we have left. Good write as usual.

Tanya Harrington

Date: 9/17/2012 2:23:00 PM

Awe sad farewell to summer, mmmm but I do love fall!!! Lovely haiku! :) Tanya

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/17/2012 1:58:00 PM

I feel the change of seasons with this lovely haiku! (ps...thanks so much for the HM in your last contest, Sara!) :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/17/2012 1:38:00 PM

a vivid 'ku with an endearing last line, sara.. your kind of nature enthralls.. thank you for including my poem in your contest; it was challenging and fun... much appreciated!..:) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/17/2012 9:42:00 AM

such a pleasant and vivid view of elegance Sara.. thankxx for my first place win in your awesome contest .. so honored to be listed with so many great poets luv ..

Len Gasun

Date: 9/17/2012 7:55:00 AM

You've excellently painted the grandiose view of the late afternoon sun with your creative words my dear Sara. I've really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing and also for making me one of the grand winners in your contest! Thank you so much! God bless you and your family always! hugs:) Leonora

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/17/2012 7:07:00 AM

I really love this wonderful write my friend! I truly enjoyed this delightfully grandiose poem that you have so illustriously written! This is a wonderfully masterful write Sara, I was extremely amazed with the the orange aura shifting through the clouds, what a beautiful sight that would be...incredible piece, Great Work!!

Late Afternoon Sun

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources