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Across a flowered field, I gaze. A daisy weeps through morning haze. One lone petal departs her side - a "love-me-not" is softly sighed. Gazing away from love denied - one more leaflet from thee is pried. Another dream towards fate's romance; a petal plucked lends second chance. The daisy's hearth has met defeat. Her children sob beneath her feet. Deflowered by a lover's act - one last petal remains in tact. "Love-me-not or love me so true?" I leave that answer up to you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/5/2020 10:10:00 AM
Beautifully expressed.
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Date: 7/22/2012 7:34:00 PM
*tear*
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Date: 2/15/2010 1:49:00 PM
I'm sure I read this lovely one before. Congratulations on your win, John! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's contest John. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/13/2010 1:50:00 PM
This is a really cool poem John. Love the wrap up in the last two stanzas Congrats. well deserved. Robert
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Date: 2/13/2010 11:37:00 AM
lThis is a sweet poem deserving of win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/13/2010 11:14:00 AM
Congrats John on your winning poem in Laura's contest... an amazing Sonnet for your enjoyable victory in the spotlight now.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 2/13/2010 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with a very nice sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 2/13/2010 8:29:00 AM
Another jewel in your lovely wealth of poetry. Congratulations on this winner, John! ~Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/13/2010 7:58:00 AM
Many congratulations John, on your win in Larua's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/13/2010 7:23:00 AM
Eloquent expression of longing, John. Hope you are feeling better now. Congratulations on your success in Laura's contest! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/18/2009 11:51:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/23/2008 10:35:00 PM
Love sonnets and how you approached the doubt and hope of such a situation... Beautiful.. Merry Christmas & Happy New Year.. D.
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Date: 12/9/2008 10:15:00 AM
aww so sweet, I used to do that with flower petles when I was a tenager, the he loves me he loves me not thing, this is a great write and thanks for your kind feed back and happy holidays to you too, God bless you from diane
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Date: 11/19/2008 12:34:00 PM
Lovely poem, John, and congrats for your place in the contest. Very simply and ellegantly written exposing your gentle heart and your open mind as they remain attached to your faith and hope. Wonderful! love, karen
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Date: 9/13/2008 7:51:00 PM
amazing poetry, beautiful words, wonderfull theme and amazing write!!! BRAVO!!! congrats on ur win Mehak
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Date: 9/5/2008 12:46:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Regards, Fatima.
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