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Last Waltz

leaf---listless lifeless
  waltz within wanton winds....
  autumn’s abjectness

© Harry J Horsman  2011

naturehaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2011 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Chris's contest Harry. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 3/6/2011 6:43:00 PM

Congratulations Harry on a well deserved eighth place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 3:31:00 PM

This is brilliant, Harry. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/6/2011 1:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Chris, harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 6:45:00 AM

Congrats Harry on your wonderful win in the Alliteration Haiku contest with this stunning selection of creativity.. enjoy your top ten win with luv my friend.. awesome...

Kash Poet

Date: 3/6/2011 5:42:00 AM

Awesome Haiku Harry!Congrats on your win---kashinath

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/6/2011 4:38:00 AM

Wow Harry. Loved this super piece. many congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2011 10:48:00 PM

Harry, looks like you did a leaf one too. and I love how you did yours. Congratulations in this contest. Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/5/2011 10:14:00 PM

Coming back here to say super congrats, Harry! Really happy to see this one win :)!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/5/2011 7:33:00 PM

Very, very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/5/2011 7:01:00 PM

congratlations to you Harry!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/5/2011 10:29:00 AM

A very vivid haiku, Harry-- and you give a melancholy feel for it too-- wish you the best in Chris' contest :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/5/2011 9:22:00 AM

The seasons waltz on with little regard to how they affect plants, animals or even humans, Harry. Great haiku with fine alliteration and the last line is quite profound. Best wishes in the alliteration contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2011 4:28:00 PM

nice one Harry. I can see the leaf waltzing within the wanton winds! Excellent. Thanks for the comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 10:46:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Harry. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/3/2011 9:54:00 AM

Good one Harry, Love the last line..BG