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Last Waltz

leaf---listless lifeless waltz within wanton winds.... autumn’s abjectness © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Date: 3/7/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Chris's contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations Harry on a well deserved eighth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:31:00 PM
This is brilliant, Harry. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2011 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Chris, harry
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:45:00 AM
Congrats Harry on your wonderful win in the Alliteration Haiku contest with this stunning selection of creativity.. enjoy your top ten win with luv my friend.. awesome...
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:42:00 AM
Awesome Haiku Harry!Congrats on your win---kashinath
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Date: 3/6/2011 4:38:00 AM
Wow Harry. Loved this super piece. many congrats.
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Date: 3/5/2011 10:48:00 PM
Harry, looks like you did a leaf one too. and I love how you did yours. Congratulations in this contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/5/2011 10:14:00 PM
Coming back here to say super congrats, Harry! Really happy to see this one win :)!
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Date: 3/5/2011 7:33:00 PM
Very, very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/5/2011 7:01:00 PM
congratlations to you Harry!
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Date: 3/5/2011 10:29:00 AM
A very vivid haiku, Harry-- and you give a melancholy feel for it too-- wish you the best in Chris' contest :)
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Date: 3/5/2011 9:22:00 AM
The seasons waltz on with little regard to how they affect plants, animals or even humans, Harry. Great haiku with fine alliteration and the last line is quite profound. Best wishes in the alliteration contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2011 4:28:00 PM
nice one Harry. I can see the leaf waltzing within the wanton winds! Excellent. Thanks for the comment
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:46:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Harry. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:54:00 AM
Good one Harry, Love the last line..BG
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Date: 3/3/2011 7:15:00 AM
a gentle exposion for the senses, harry! best winning luck if for a contest..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/3/2011 5:13:00 AM
A very pleasing poem, enjoyed
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