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Last Waltz

leaf---listless lifeless
  waltz within wanton winds....
  autumn’s abjectness

© Harry J Horsman  2011

naturehaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

March 7, 2011 at 11:40 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Chris's contest Harry. Love, Carol

John Freeman

March 6, 2011 at 6:43 PM

Congratulations Harry on a well deserved eighth place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

March 6, 2011 at 3:31 PM

This is brilliant, Harry. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 6, 2011 at 1:17 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Chris, harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 6, 2011 at 6:45 AM

Congrats Harry on your wonderful win in the Alliteration Haiku contest with this stunning selection of creativity.. enjoy your top ten win with luv my friend.. awesome...

Kash Poet

March 6, 2011 at 5:42 AM

Awesome Haiku Harry!Congrats on your win---kashinath

Tahera Mannan

March 6, 2011 at 4:38 AM

Wow Harry. Loved this super piece. many congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

March 5, 2011 at 10:48 PM

Harry, looks like you did a leaf one too. and I love how you did yours. Congratulations in this contest. Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 5, 2011 at 10:14 PM

Coming back here to say super congrats, Harry! Really happy to see this one win :)!

Joyce Johnson

March 5, 2011 at 7:33 PM

Very, very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Robert A. Dufresne

March 5, 2011 at 7:01 PM

congratlations to you Harry!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

March 5, 2011 at 10:29 AM

A very vivid haiku, Harry-- and you give a melancholy feel for it too-- wish you the best in Chris' contest :)

Carolyn Devonshire

March 5, 2011 at 9:22 AM

The seasons waltz on with little regard to how they affect plants, animals or even humans, Harry. Great haiku with fine alliteration and the last line is quite profound. Best wishes in the alliteration contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Robert A. Dufresne

March 3, 2011 at 4:28 PM

nice one Harry. I can see the leaf waltzing within the wanton winds! Excellent. Thanks for the comment

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 3, 2011 at 10:46 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Harry. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol