Last Vestiges of Light

Sunlit rays gild a filigree Moon; while intensifying Luna's glow. And She shimmers, like a gold doubloon; in a creek, where rippled waters flow. She adopts a halo over time: highlighting Her celestial ascent. And like a Goddess, She starts Her climb; a starlet in this gala event. An ebony curtain pierced by stars ushers in the beauty of the Night. And a red blush tints the planet Mars; as Venus reveals Her virgin light. Birds surrender the night skies to bats playing hide and seek with skittish moths. And along with silken welcome mats, spiders spin intricate tablecloths. Darkness swallows the remnants of Day, imposing shadows upon the Night. And color silently fades away; amidst the last vestiges of light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Lovely imagery, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Agree totally with Laura, couldn't say it better. Loved this read! You are amazing! Keep them coming we love them!
Pinet Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:06 AM
Thanks John, your comments are both encouraging and most welcome. Emile.
Leiser Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Stunning imagery woven in silk, Emile! Loved this beautiful write, 7, and all the best to you :)
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Thank you so much Laura, it is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. Emile.
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Just beautiful, Emile. I think your writing probably even awes the moon that awes you. I feel it should be against the law for you to go x amount of days without writing for you create much needed beauty and never fail to wow me. (I'm probably repeating myself) ... CayCay
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Thanks so much CayCay, your words have touched my heart. Emile.
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 6:20 PM
A fabulous verse emile...love the moon theme
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 6:29 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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