Last Thoughts of a Dying Warrior

His mind lay prey to mumbled threats within,
drawn to perch upon a twig-thin edge 
slung between a gauze of blatant dreams.
Like some homeless bird come to make a nest,
it yanked discarded bits of skin and hair,
from bins of vain memory's hoard, 
then joined to form a place where 
a brain might rest and preen.
Once settled, he drank
Not from the stilled rummaging 
but the distilled rum in his hand
and sang discordant notes that clanged 
above the cough of fractured words. 
“The mind is myth. And so am I."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ray Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 9:21 AM
intriguing entertainment and well executed, enjoyed this very much
Goldsmith Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 9:10 AM
A wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day...................
Ozemko Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Thanks for reading and for your kind comment
Warlov Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 12:59 AM
Or 'never minding the mist' until it's too late, bespeaking a cowardice. ~ "The world breaks everyone but some find strength in the broken places" - Ernest Hemingway
Ozemko Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 3:50 AM
Always happy to be read and receive comments.
Ozemko Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 3:48 AM
Thanks!
Villalon Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 10:57 AM
There's symphony in the vibrant words of the valiant... chords beneath its wings. Great poem you wrote here Sir John! Thanks to poetrysoup for its email today... reading a poem of yours again! Cliff
Ozemko Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 3:51 AM
Thanks for reading and your comments
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