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My thanks go out to Lin Lane, my dear friend, who was gracious enough to accept my offer to write together. We all know how talented she is. We have shared our ink before and hopefully some day soon be able to do it again. We hope you enjoy our effort. I love you Lin!

With friend in tow, we take a stroll Slight change of scenery To bid farewell to summer's spell And its fading greenery My carefree friend took one last spin Through weeds now turning gold Then chased a squirrel hiding brown pearls To dig in winter's cold There's flying V's. on Southern breeze In loud squawking migration Flying in low to let us know Their Southern destination As they go by, wings wave good-bye As autumn closes in My friend and I watch them and sigh Then feel a shift in the wind Sunlight filters through branches of elm Discarding summer's fashionable leaves Wearing golden hues tinged in rust They fall as tears from one who grieves My companion sprints after them But soon gives up the chase Returning to match his steps with mine We saunter on at an easy pace Clouds are rolling in from the North Painting the sky gray, a little dark We stop for a moment in hesitation Wondering if we should leave the park But we're having such a great time walking On this crisp cusp of summer's day And though we didn't do much talking My Buddy and I decide to stay By Lin lane and Daniel Turner

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Date: 6/14/2017 5:10:00 PM
Oh, I love poetry stories like this. Nice collaboration from the both of you :) I have one called Angel's Hope" & my latest is The Girl And The Maze Keeper. & a few others. Thank you for reading my Shadow poem. I wrote it as I seen a shadow on the wall :) Have an awesome day.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/15/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thank you, Debbie. I must drop by and check them out:)
Date: 9/1/2016 8:19:00 PM
Your collaboration is pure simpatico! I enjoyed every word. Kudos for creating such a lovely poem together! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/1/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thank you Mrs Connie. I'm glad you enjoyed our little get together. I love writing with Lin. i respect her talent so much.
Date: 9/1/2016 3:28:00 PM
This was a lovely write, i felt like I was right there with you! Great collaboration, I couldn't tell who was writing it was that seamless!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/1/2016 6:55:00 PM
Thank you John. It's always an honor for me to write with Lin. Yeah, she's that good! I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 9/1/2016 12:41:00 PM
Danny, Thank you for allowing me to take this stroll with you and Buddy. The honor was mine and I thank you for such sweet compliments.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/1/2016 1:33:00 PM
Believe me Lin, the pleasure was all mine. Although my vocabulary is quite extensive, I'll be damned if I can find the words to tell you what your friendship means to me, so I'll just say thank you and smile. You are truly a treasure.
Date: 9/1/2016 10:59:00 AM
You make a lovely couple in print, congratulations...
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/1/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie. Lin is a special friend and I was honored by her acceptance. I appreciate your kindness.
Date: 9/1/2016 10:06:00 AM
Enjoying your ink and the wonderful picture you paint. The only thing I get excited for when I see the V's heading your way is that they will be replaced by the Eagles here. If you are healthy you should consider a trip to Starved Rock State Park up here to take in the Eagles...a spectacular sight
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/1/2016 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Tim. I don't have to, we have then right here in Hot Springs. We are surrounded by lakes and mountains. I appreciate the offer and the friendly visit:)

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