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The woman lying on the hospital bed Silent, intuition discerning The last breath, last sigh, goodbye Whispered beneath a soft cry From the soul who she was leaving behind She had been a daughter, a wife, a mother She’d known sorrow, sadness, hurting While still believing in the times When joy filled her heart, soul and mind With memories of pleasures so satisfying The woman was thin, so skinny bones jabbed At the ones who bent to hug her Leave their mark, their kiss, there on her cheek Where tearstains had left their reproach Small details of a light, a life, almost concluded She had sharp blue eyes that sparkled like stars In the heavens after a summer storm passed by Eyes so alive they could nearly speak With words of passion, praying and praising Promising to shine through the passing that was so near The woman had taught me things I couldn’t know Would accompany me through small wars Second thoughts, death and divorce Wonderful dreams and moments of pure fear Wisdoms that would never disappoint me She once bandaged my cuts and bruises Applying ointments and solutions While assuring me that I would heal in time Just as she had mended herself From so many hospital stays and sick days The woman was much like a whisper Silencing my worries with her tenderness Breathing rich blessings through my life With hope, faith and love that would guide Coloring my thoughts in hues of Godly light She was so quiet now, lying in the big bed That seemed to consume her with crisp, white sheets Reminding me that she was so close To carrying wings instead of that deathlike pallor Which revealed the moment on the horizon… The last sigh – the one that still haunts me With its heavy handed weakness The feeble breath of a frail old woman Who knew that living would soon mean Giving up the life that had been given her… By a heavenly Father who would soon welcome her! The last sigh – was her spirit’s sendoff! Your Favorite Poem Of 2021 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke November 22, 2021

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Date: 9/8/2021 3:14:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this poignant, powerful write, Regina!:-)
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:23:00 AM
Gina, this is spoken with such tenderness. Your wonderful wording just grabs at my heart and leaves its signature of a pensive sigh. Wonderfully written poem of ultimate, eternal hope and confidence. Congratulations on your win dear friend! Hugs and blessings.
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Date: 9/2/2021 2:58:00 PM
Gina, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance
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Date: 8/22/2021 5:53:00 AM
Moments of last sigh are always sad. Your poem evokes those feelings. Well done, Gina.
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Date: 8/21/2021 11:11:00 PM
The last sigh is beautiful, Regina, good luck in the contest.
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