Last Pharaoh of Egypt

Cleopatra, the last Pharaoh of Egypt, could have had Caesar or Anthony as a co-regent, but rather than putting such power in either man's grasp, she put leadership decisions in the path of an asp.
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Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 4:26 PM
I have read your short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Rigoler Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 4:39 PM
Love it, CayCay. Not many Soupers wtir clerihews which says much about the paucity of their knowledge of world history. I have a few on Cleopatra and Julius Caesar too. All historical personages are fodder for a clerihew. Yes, I have several poems on fleas. I'll look them up on my master files and post one or two for your pleasure. Many thanks for your generous comments and best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
Godwin Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:14 AM
Oh, Maurice - please do just that, I really would appreciate a Soup message or whatever should you find fleas in your files. Thank you for such consideration. Every time I read you, I think how much my Dad would enjoy your writes were he still here. So, I enjoy reading you for him, as well as myself. Thank you again. Be well ... CayCay
Proxenos Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Re-visiting my friend, to congratulate you on a fine win! Got soupmail - you are golden! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Y. Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 4:05 AM
Hi CayCay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Oh dang it, Caycay, yours was a funny one, but I did not like the use of clasp for that one end line!! Crap, I would love to have seen this one higher on the list, but I was judging it blind!! Congrats, dear, the idea was very clever.
Y. Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 12:46 AM
Hi CayCay, This a good entry for the contest theme. Cleopatra did make her mark in history! I wish you the best of in the contest. Thanks for visiting me today. It's always a pleasure when you stop by:-)Alexis
Proxenos Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 11:34 PM
Beautiful Clerihew CayCay - this sounds like a sure win! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Vaso Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 1:22 AM
Maybe she chose the wiser snake!
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