Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

Last Night I Dreamt

I search your woods, I walk them long
Through every twilight mood and beat;
Sometimes,  the mirage peals  a storm
Or gushes rain as ferns entreat.

Last night the fireflies bright as stars
Pound on my chest like stones' mild tap
A whispered breeze speaks our memoirs
On hanging vines as buds unwrap.


Last night Contest
Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Serious Category
7/31/13

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Debbie Duncan August 11, 2013 at 11:57 AM a nice winning write nette ;}

Skat A August 11, 2013 at 3:19 AM a wonderful win Nette..... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A August 7, 2013 at 11:43 PM Hello Nette, Congratulations in "Last Night I Dreamt ... contest :-)" xox~~~ always Linda

Sara Kendrick August 6, 2013 at 2:25 PM Great winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara

Richard Lamoureux August 5, 2013 at 9:43 PM Great job Nette, congratulations!

Audrey Haick August 5, 2013 at 9:24 PM Congratulations on another very fine entry and win, Nette!

Francine Roberts August 5, 2013 at 8:10 PM congrats nette on your 3rd place win in the serious category, beautiful

Poet Tacito August 1, 2013 at 8:07 AM That last line gave me massive goosebumps. Hell of a dream you had here...

Russell Sivey July 31, 2013 at 8:09 PM You have created another masterpiece by this descriptive brilliant write! I truly love the dreamscape you have put together for this illustrious poem my friend! I'm amazed by this charming piece, such a Grand Work!!

Joe Flach July 31, 2013 at 1:06 PM Lovely Nette. I love the way the poem comes full circle with "your woods". Much mystery in your dreams - I hope love is not at threat. Perhaps the dream you dream tonight will offer solace in those same woods and the whispered breeze of memoirs will rouse more fantasy. I love your command of the English language in your poetry. Very creative and enchanting. Joe

Eileen Manassian July 31, 2013 at 12:22 PM An intriguing tale....Makes one wonder where ir how or where it will end....hugs

Heather Ober July 31, 2013 at 12:17 PM GORGEOUS! You truly paint pictures with your words, Nette. Always such a pleasure to read your work.

Sara Kendrick July 31, 2013 at 11:41 AM Unique and creative work that you have penned...Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Donna Jones July 31, 2013 at 11:08 AM WOW.....what a mind you have....beautiful