Last Night I Dreamt

Last night I dreamt that my trek was finally over         Tightly holding my hand as if to never let it go        A little girl that has waited her entire life        To see her father       Soon very soon        No longer a dream        Three more days baby        I will hold your hand forever                                               SERIOUS                   7/28/2013

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Date: 8/5/2013 5:42:00 AM
This dream was one which misted my eyes..Some dreams do happen to come true and when they do what joy they bring.
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Date: 8/4/2013 2:46:00 PM
It's a great thing when good dreams become reality. This is another good write.
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Date: 8/4/2013 1:25:00 AM
just saw that you call your daughter angie too. Don't remember if I told you. I googled about the bengal tiger. Otherwise,I'd know nothing about them.
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Richard Ferry
Date: 8/4/2013 11:41:00 AM
Andrea..You don`t have to be there. Your imagination always brings you where you want to be. Reason you are so good at putting down on paper what you see
Date: 8/2/2013 8:28:00 PM
wonderful write Richard....best wishes
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Richard Ferry
Date: 8/2/2013 9:14:00 PM
Thanks Joseph... Appreciate
Date: 8/2/2013 10:17:00 AM
- A good dream, Richard - I like your write. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Ferry
Date: 8/2/2013 1:21:00 PM
now a reality....have a good weekend yourself, Anne
Date: 8/2/2013 1:28:00 AM
seeing this one again, I sure wish I had done one as good as this!!
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Richard Ferry
Date: 8/2/2013 1:22:00 PM
You do. Mostly better...Thanks for positive energy...Rick
Date: 7/31/2013 2:30:00 PM
richard I enjoyed your note. My daughter's name is a little different from yours. It's angela. Do you call yours Angie for short?
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Richard Ferry
Date: 8/1/2013 4:04:00 PM
yes
Date: 7/30/2013 3:38:00 PM
It's wonderful when dreams come true. And blessings finally come through. And God see's fit for us to win. It's proof that he forgives our sin. Peace. :)
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Richard Ferry
Date: 8/1/2013 4:05:00 PM
it is wonderful
Date: 7/30/2013 5:56:00 AM
Not much more to say..The poem says it all.
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Date: 7/30/2013 12:13:00 AM
wow. it's SERIOUS??? THis is fantastic. And I want to hear more about it!!!
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Richard Ferry
Date: 7/30/2013 5:56:00 AM
Poem says it all..Time to return
Date: 7/29/2013 2:36:00 AM
A very moving write, Richard...Very moving...
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Richard Ferry
Date: 7/29/2013 6:52:00 PM
thanks Eileen..Time to spend time with my little girl
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