Last Night

I woke up and went into the backyard 
The big moon shone like a baking sheet 
The distance to it was short 
You could run to it
Every sound was frozen
Like drizzle on a blade of grass
Only my heart was hammering
And the moan of the Potomac 
Pushing the waters like Sisyphus into the sea
While my breath flowed like a white sail 
Leaving the empty shell of my body 
The ruined ship 
That had brought me this far
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gasun Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 11:29 PM
A very wonderful poem. Big congratulations on your awesome win my dear Betim. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you so much for sharing! love/hugs, Leonora
Roberts Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 1:31 AM
congrats ...Seren
De Burca Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 1:17 PM
Beautiful and congrats on your win. Best wishes S.
A   Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Betim, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA
Johnson Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 12:41 PM
Nice work. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:25 AM
BETIM,,;-) CONGRATULATIONS... NICE WORK IN BRIAN'S CONTEST... ALWAYS~PD
Neels Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 10:05 AM
You really took me on a journey with this one Betim ;) enjoyed it, congratulations on your win ;) Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 8:19 AM
congrats Betim on a superb write and win luv..
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 7:43 AM
Good Morning and Congratulations on your win in Brian's "One To Fifteen" contest Betim. Love, Carol
Zzzzz Avatar
April 25, 2011 at 11:48 AM
An imaginative write. Interesting to read.
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