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Last Night

Like he’d done for forty years he placed their breakfast on the table. But since the stroke his wife had little appetite for food anymore. He turned on the morning news while she sat and stared out the window. Later in the garden he picked tomatoes and she watched the sun fall below an orange horizon. As darkness crept into the house, they undressed and prepared for bed. He whispered, “I love you.” To which she had no reply. While searching for her the next morning, he saw the check from the life insurance company laying unopened on the table. flowers born in spring bloom brightest in summer days wither in winter

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Date: 12/19/2023 2:54:00 PM
sad and poignant story told with such sensitivity and with soft, touching imagery. The narrative was well written and the Haiku brought a depth of sadness to your creation. Nicely done, Jerry. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 12/19/2023 12:56:00 PM
A poignant write from a sensitive caring soul! Unbelievably touching and sad Jerry! Debx
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Date: 12/19/2023 11:27:00 AM
Your storytelling beautifully captures the tender nuances of a long-standing connection weathering the storms of life... A stroke and things like Dementia can be really heart breaking in a relationship and 40 years is a long long time.. this is very sad..
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