Cheryl Hoffman Poet Limerick

Last Minute Shoppers

Getting to the store quick on the double,
their faces look anxious and troubled,
minutes to spare,
pulling out their hair,
caffeine the hustle in their bustle.








12-22-16

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Freddie Robinson Jr. December 23, 2016 at 3:54 PM You could make a good living writing these limericks, Cheryl. You're the best. Just so funny and true, I love what your pen do. This is another great limerick. Love and joy to you. Have a Merry Christmas. Cheryl Hoffman December 23, 2016 at 4:08 PM I wish I could Freddie; but there are much better writers out there than me so the competition would be too much… so glad you liked it and love and joy to you too! Merry Christmas Freddie!:)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 23, 2016 at 7:12 AM - A fun one, Cheryl :)) - Marry Christmas to you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Cheryl Hoffman December 23, 2016 at 8:05 AM Glad you liked it Anne-Lise, Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones too and thanx for nice visit!:)

Supraja Kannan December 23, 2016 at 6:57 AM Ha ha... Funny but true...A 7... Cheryl Hoffman December 23, 2016 at 8:04 AM Glad you liked it Supraja, thanx for nice visit!:)

Mike Hauser December 22, 2016 at 8:05 PM You been following me around? Lol! Cheryl Hoffman December 22, 2016 at 9:51 PM Ha, ha, was that you on aisle 11 pulling your hair out? ;)

Daniel Turner December 22, 2016 at 3:43 PM No thanks, Cheryl. I love the humor:) Thanks for the smile:) Cheryl Hoffman December 22, 2016 at 7:21 PM I don't blame you Daniel; who wants to get in all that mayhem! Glad you liked it Daniel!:)

Jan Allison December 22, 2016 at 1:23 PM made me giggle ... If I've not got it now Cheryl it's not worth worrying about - no last minute shopping for me:-) hugs jan xx Cheryl Hoffman December 22, 2016 at 7:20 PM I completely understand Jan, who wants to get in all that mayhem! Glad made you laugh ~hugs Che xx

Heidi Sands December 22, 2016 at 10:26 AM Funny Cheryl LOL Cheryl Hoffman December 22, 2016 at 7:19 PM Glad you liked my limerick Heidi!:)

Lim'Rik Flats December 22, 2016 at 9:55 AM "hustle in their bustle" - GOTD! Think I'll go watch shoppers at the mall;-) grins 'n grits ~ j Cheryl Hoffman December 22, 2016 at 7:18 PM I feel like a shopper at work, lol (Were always hustling and bustling its been so busy!). Glad you like it and thanx for witty visit John!:) Grin 'n grits back~c