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Last Minute Shoppers

Getting to the store quick on the double, their faces look anxious and troubled, minutes to spare, pulling out their hair, caffeine the hustle in their bustle. 12-22-16

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/23/2016 3:54:00 PM

You could make a good living writing these limericks, Cheryl. You're the best. Just so funny and true, I love what your pen do. This is another great limerick. Love and joy to you. Have a Merry Christmas.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/23/2016 4:08:00 PM

I wish I could Freddie; but there are much better writers out there than me so the competition would be too much… so glad you liked it and love and joy to you too! Merry Christmas Freddie!:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/23/2016 7:12:00 AM

- A fun one, Cheryl :)) - Marry Christmas to you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/23/2016 8:05:00 AM

Glad you liked it Anne-Lise, Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones too and thanx for nice visit!:)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/23/2016 6:57:00 AM

Ha ha... Funny but true...A 7...

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/23/2016 8:04:00 AM

Glad you liked it Supraja, thanx for nice visit!:)

Mike Hauser

Date: 12/22/2016 8:05:00 PM

You been following me around? Lol!

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/22/2016 9:51:00 PM

Ha, ha, was that you on aisle 11 pulling your hair out? ;)

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/22/2016 3:43:00 PM

No thanks, Cheryl. I love the humor:) Thanks for the smile:)

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/22/2016 7:21:00 PM

I don't blame you Daniel; who wants to get in all that mayhem! Glad you liked it Daniel!:)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/22/2016 1:23:00 PM

made me giggle ... If I've not got it now Cheryl it's not worth worrying about - no last minute shopping for me:-) hugs jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/22/2016 7:20:00 PM

I completely understand Jan, who wants to get in all that mayhem! Glad made you laugh ~hugs Che xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/22/2016 10:26:00 AM

Funny Cheryl LOL

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/22/2016 7:19:00 PM

Glad you liked my limerick Heidi!:)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/22/2016 9:55:00 AM

"hustle in their bustle" - GOTD! Think I'll go watch shoppers at the mall;-) grins 'n grits ~ j

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 12/22/2016 7:18:00 PM

I feel like a shopper at work, lol (Were always hustling and bustling its been so busy!). Glad you like it and thanx for witty visit John!:) Grin 'n grits back~c