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Pose, sitting sideways in a chair. Ana Rosa:

- Last Kiss -

Bring me to a place where the stars shine forever
White lies, the beast is finally slowed down to zero
I know the things are changed now, a last kiss






15.05.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu

June 4, 2017 at 8:58 PM

The last kiss is so sad It reminds me when I kissed my husband for the last time. Anyway it is agreat poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 5, 2017 at 8:09 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments, Darlene :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

June 3, 2017 at 8:52 PM

Love the picture and the words even if they seem a little sad :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 4, 2017 at 6:09 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments, Debbie :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

May 31, 2017 at 4:37 PM

Sounds sad on this poem. A last kiss in itself is sad. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 1, 2017 at 2:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and your friendly support, Phyllis :) - Always nice to see you :) - greeting and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

May 30, 2017 at 4:14 PM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, This one its home very much. The words and images of "Last Kiss" speaks to dreams and the heart of eternity itself. A Fabulous Sijo!! Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 31, 2017 at 12:59 AM

- Thank you for your lovely comments, Gary :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

May 25, 2017 at 7:45 AM

The beautiful image sets the scene for this sad and lovely poem of yours Anne-Lise, especially love the first line. ...Maria7+

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 25, 2017 at 7:54 AM

- Many thanks for lovely comments and a 7, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Semih Bilgic

May 25, 2017 at 7:43 AM

very nice,alike you

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 25, 2017 at 7:53 AM

- Thank you very much, Semih :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

May 24, 2017 at 5:08 PM

Sad Anne-Lise. I'm sorry I missed the original version.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 25, 2017 at 7:52 AM

- " the original version " .... ? ... - Where is the original version? - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2017 at 6:14 PM

Very nice one to go with that picture. That picture is gorgeous!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 22, 2017 at 3:14 AM

- Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

May 20, 2017 at 4:10 PM

Without any doubt, a sad and emotional poem, Anne-Lise. A last kiss stays imprinted for eternity. #7 Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 20, 2017 at 4:13 PM

- Many thanks for lovely comments and a 7, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

May 20, 2017 at 12:16 PM

when the end is close....Heaven Only Knows....where the heart goes....Beautiful as always anne....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 20, 2017 at 12:20 PM

- A chapter over .... a new start - The beast is weakened to zero :) - Thank you very much, Eric :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

May 20, 2017 at 10:40 AM

Powerful and philosophical both, excellently said. A 7. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 20, 2017 at 12:11 PM

- Thank you for your nice comments and a 7, Bl :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Verlecia Fields

May 20, 2017 at 10:40 AM

Made me think of changing relationships - changing understandings - changing bodies

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 20, 2017 at 12:12 PM

- Thank you very much, Verlecia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

May 18, 2017 at 5:14 PM

Beautiful. We go to that place where we can visualise the scene.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 19, 2017 at 2:51 AM

- Many thanks for lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Ricci

May 18, 2017 at 3:05 PM

Hello Anne. This is powerful and expressive. I love the voice and tone. The attached image you share is marvelous. The first line alone sets the tone that this should be read out loud. Well done entirely. Enjoy the night.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 19, 2017 at 2:50 AM

- Thank you for your nice comments, Lisa :) - I greatly appreciate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abosede Ogundare

May 18, 2017 at 12:02 PM

This is lovely Anne-Lise! The picture is beautiful and I particularly love the first line.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 18, 2017 at 12:06 PM

- A peaceful place, Abosede :) - Many thanks for lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

May 17, 2017 at 1:28 AM

"No tears" made me tears with your beautiful pen. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 17, 2017 at 6:21 AM

- Thank you very much, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

May 16, 2017 at 6:46 PM

So beautiful, Anne-Lise ~*

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 17, 2017 at 6:20 AM

- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing

May 16, 2017 at 4:49 PM

A last kiss is memorable from its sadness. So beautiful, Miss Anne-Lise. You are marvelous with your pen :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 17, 2017 at 6:20 AM

- Thank you very much, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven

May 16, 2017 at 2:51 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, deep emotions felt when reading this sad yet beautiful sadness. Your gentleness always shines through in your writes and this gentleness is the beauty at the heart of your poetry Anne-Lise. An excellent write that touches the heart so softly yet stirs such deep emotions. May your pen ever run gold. This has to be a seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 17, 2017 at 6:23 AM

- Mike, it's a big pleasure to receive a 7 and a fav. from you my friend :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)