Last Ink To Bleed

If these words were the last ink I were about to bleed     they'd surround you and caress you     succumbing to your ever loving need         they'd dance in your fullness     flutter aloud in your grace     graze upon the cherished crimson     accentuating your precious face         the type, bold with cursive mixed in     would capitalize where all that beauty begins     each curve christened and every form traced     slowly oh so so slowly elegant words we'd embrace         beheld in the contextual lingering of your eyes     hearing accents accentuated with flowery reprise     sentences will serve with orgasmic exchange     as the pens erect position is neatly rearranged         endearing a climatic exclamation wound before hitting send dipping into the well oiled well again and again
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Date: 6/15/2018 7:02:00 PM
Tim, so sensual and fabulous descriptive write... Hugs Eve ~' *
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Date: 6/14/2018 10:49:00 AM
Sounds like a little Freudian slip in there my sensual friend, well done again...
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Date: 6/13/2018 6:42:00 PM
Such rhythm and elegant words, Tim! My compliments1
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 6/13/2018 6:11:00 PM
I agree with Ilene. The comparison of ink to blood draws in the reader, enhancing the emotions in every beautiful line. Especially enjoy the line "sentences will serve with orgasmic exchange." Deeply powerful, but clever as well, Tim! Hugs, Carolyn
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 6:15:00 PM
Great to see you dearest Carolyn. I had knee surgery yesterday so I had many thoughts roaming the halls Hugs xxx
Date: 6/13/2018 5:40:00 PM
wonderful! i love the whole comparison with the "ink you bleed"...
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thanks Ilene
Date: 6/13/2018 3:56:00 PM
WHOA.....you little metaphoric maniac you......that is some hot blooded ink you're spilling...
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 3:59:00 PM
Thanks Johnny...I literally spilled blood afterwards
Date: 6/13/2018 3:46:00 PM
Phwoarrrrr what sensual lines Tim - got to add this little gem to my faves I LOVE it:-) hugs jan xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 6/13/2018 6:11:00 PM
What knife, Tim? Are you okay? Sending healing wishes your way.
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2018 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Jan...wrote it before going under the knife
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