Last Day

walking in the sand rising tide sloshing my feet vacation over thoughts of home wave over me leaving the beach tomorrow
written June 29, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 11:17 PM
We are a different person on a beach; I am convinced we transform into mermaids or something.
Hankins Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Could be. We are near Mother Ocean. There is just something about the beach that is very special.
Wolf Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Wave hello... Wave goodbye... Ride the wave... :) gw
Hankins Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Thanks so much, gw. I appreciated the sentiments. 'Tis true...wave hello; wave goodbye...
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 2:33 PM
You deserve a good rest. Enjoy your vacation; please check soup mail. Greetings
Hankins Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 6:45 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad.
Bauer Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:07 PM
hope you had a nice vacation, milton! i enjoyed your poem about your last day...
Hankins Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Thanks so much for your visit and your read, Ilene. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Ball Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:33 PM
A the end of a long awaited vacation. You don't want to leave but you look forward to getting home and resting. Nce job. God Bless, JB
Hankins Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Thank you for your comment, JB. I enjoyed it.
Rose  Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Its nice to go away but nothing like returning to home sweet home, enjoyed your poetry today, Keep well and keep writing :)
Hankins Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 12:52 PM
Thanks so much, Mystic Rose Rose. I always love a compliment.
Cunningham Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 11:46 AM
Sadly you're having such a good time that it flies by and you're soon packing your bags for home. Tom
Hankins Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 11:46 AM
That's the way it seems to go, Tom. Thanks for your thoughts.
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