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Last Day

walking in the sand rising tide sloshing my feet vacation over thoughts of home wave over me leaving the beach tomorrow written June 29, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/30/2021 11:17:00 PM

We are a different person on a beach; I am convinced we transform into mermaids or something.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/1/2021 7:38:00 AM

Could be. We are near Mother Ocean. There is just something about the beach that is very special.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/29/2021 6:47:00 PM

Wave hello... Wave goodbye... Ride the wave... :) gw

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 6:49:00 PM

Thanks so much, gw. I appreciated the sentiments. 'Tis true...wave hello; wave goodbye...

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/29/2021 2:33:00 PM

You deserve a good rest. Enjoy your vacation; please check soup mail. Greetings

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 6:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Lasaad.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/29/2021 1:07:00 PM

hope you had a nice vacation, milton! i enjoyed your poem about your last day...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 1:27:00 PM

Thanks so much for your visit and your read, Ilene. I always appreciate hearing from you.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/29/2021 12:33:00 PM

A the end of a long awaited vacation. You don't want to leave but you look forward to getting home and resting. Nce job. God Bless, JB

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 12:52:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, JB. I enjoyed it.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/29/2021 11:56:00 AM

Its nice to go away but nothing like returning to home sweet home, enjoyed your poetry today, Keep well and keep writing :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 12:52:00 PM

Thanks so much, Mystic Rose Rose. I always love a compliment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/29/2021 11:46:00 AM

Sadly you're having such a good time that it flies by and you're soon packing your bags for home. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 11:46:00 AM

That's the way it seems to go, Tom. Thanks for your thoughts.