Last Crimson Swirl

Drowning in self degradation
Deliberate affliction is exacerbating 
Crystalline facade dulling senses 
Normalcy, forgetting our consensus


Score, decennary years within  
point, swirling under skin
Finality, deaths creeping in
Exodus, my last syringe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Nicole Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 6:04 PM
"Finality, deaths creeping in." So true. As soon as we're born, we begin to die. Your thoughts are so deep and powerful and they leave me in complete awe. ~ Brandy
Johnson  Avatar
May 2, 2023 at 5:07 AM
Honesty that’s probably one of the best compilations I’ve ever received on any of my work, thanks so much brandy ~Dillon
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