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Dark is the night, Darker the soul, Fathomless depths, Stories untold... Vision now gone, Reliance on touch, Grappling for anything, Stumbling so much... Inner reflection, Compounds your fear, For years of ignorance, Make salvation unclear. Only the strong survive, As seen throughout time, Weakness your burden, A punishable crime... Until cleansing the soul, Deeper you fall, Will light again shine, Or shall in darkness you crawl? Choose wisely, For chances given are few, Consequences may vary, But blame falls only on YOU...

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Date: 10/26/2020 9:03:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading your poem
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Date: 10/18/2020 6:07:00 AM
Hi Kelly. Congratulations on your Win in a short list. Hrartfelt message feels sincerely delivered. A dire warning to delve in bravely. Meaningful universal entry.
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Date: 10/17/2020 1:22:00 PM
- The choice is not always easy, Kelly - Congratulations on a great 9th place in the contest:) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kelly Mcmanis
Date: 10/17/2020 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Date: 10/17/2020 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on the win KellyW! Linda
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Kelly Mcmanis
Date: 10/17/2020 1:41:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 10/17/2020 5:40:00 AM
You the catalyst deserve a congratulations on your win. Have great day dear poet.
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Kelly Mcmanis
Date: 10/17/2020 1:41:00 PM
I really appreciate that. Thank you!!!

Book: Shattered Sighs