Last Call

The three old Irish women stood over the casket.
They spoke
“Ah, poor man, he had a troubled life”
 “But now his problems are over”
“Or just beginning.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 1:56 PM
A creative/fun write. Thanks for the laugh. I need it... Have a great day/weekend................
Greenhough Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 11:02 AM
It brought a smile. A lot is revealed at a funeral. I'm glad I won't be there for mine.
Rodgers Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 6:04 AM
Hello John, I smiled when I read your poem with the humor. I can see my grandparents saying something like this a a funeral. Thank you for lightening my day!!
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