Last Call

The three old Irish women stood over the casket. They spoke “Ah, poor man, he had a troubled life” “But now his problems are over” “Or just beginning.”

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/27/2023 1:56:00 PM

A creative/fun write. Thanks for the laugh. I need it... Have a great day/weekend................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/27/2023 11:02:00 AM

It brought a smile. A lot is revealed at a funeral. I'm glad I won't be there for mine.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/27/2023 6:04:00 AM

Hello John, I smiled when I read your poem with the humor. I can see my grandparents saying something like this a a funeral. Thank you for lightening my day!!