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Last Acorn

I sit here musing midst these crumbled leaves. The world I used to know is vanishing. You do not think a lowly acorn grieves? It seems the elements are banishing me and my kin! In fact, I cannot see one fellow oaknut anywhere at all! ‘Twas summer when I had them all with me. We fell to ground, surviving into fall, but quickly did fall’s brightness fade to grey. My little acorn heart shook to its core to see them – one by one – stolen away by birds and rodents! What has God in store for me as on this cold hard ground I lie? Now flakes of white come falling from the sky. April 17, 2020 for the Last Acorn Poetry Contest of John Lawless

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Date: 5/7/2020 7:59:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win. Your personification talents are endless, Andrea.
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Date: 5/7/2020 7:14:00 PM
Such a vivid picture, so many memorable images, my friend. I really like the way you ended this with a question that all of us ask - "what has God in store for me?" Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 5/7/2020 6:52:00 PM
Fantastic personification/sonnet hybrid, Andrea:-) Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/25/2020 12:44:00 AM
How tenderly you drew us into the life of an unsuspecting acorn. I like the innocence of it. “The world I used to know is vanishing” ... I know this is in reference to the acorn’s world but I couldn’t help but equate it with today’s world when first I read it ... how strange it all is!
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Date: 4/22/2020 8:35:00 PM
Wonderful write Andrea. Well done making me feel this little acorns plight. Hugs
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Date: 4/22/2020 7:50:00 PM
What a beautiful and innocent moment you have created! Lonna
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Date: 4/21/2020 1:24:00 AM
This has sadly become our reality in the past month - " I cannot see one fellow oaknut anywhere at all!" -so very sad.
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Date: 4/19/2020 2:07:00 PM
I've seen some great entries for this contest... Always knew you would make a good nut lol... Great personification
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/19/2020 5:57:00 PM
yep, I am kind of nutty!!! But in a great way!
Date: 4/19/2020 1:16:00 AM
Your ode to a lonely acorn is another example of why your sonnets are so beloved, Andrea. Perfect flow, rhyme, and your love for nature tell a sad tale from the acorn's point of view. And thank you for not writing 'on this cold hard ground I lay'! Teaching good grammar by example! Love this imaginative and creative gem.
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Date: 4/19/2020 12:05:00 AM
To await the blanket, of snow...I truly love personifications. That second line of the second stanza, is so clever, so subtle. Good luck in the contest.. also stay safe, Andrea... Yes, Mary Yaws. i'm re-reading my favourites poems at the moment, and i had one of hers, she was active 2010, Her poetry truly depressing, yet wondrous poems, of her personification no doubt..
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Date: 4/18/2020 1:55:00 PM
Well done, Andrea! Squirrels are renown planters of acorns except in Apacheria where women make acorn stew, a favourite of all Apaches! Aloha! Rico
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2020 2:03:00 PM
so is THAT how the acorns get planted into trees? The squirrels take them elsewhere? I did not think about that.
Date: 4/18/2020 1:14:00 PM
This is REALLY skillfully and creatively written, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 4/18/2020 11:16:00 AM
Brilliantly penned! I love the vivid imagery portrayed in this gem. To my faves..Stay safe dear poet Andrea.
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Date: 4/18/2020 10:35:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrea, I still don't know what to write for this contest. Stay well and don’t let the isolation get you down. Hugs Eve
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. The isolation does not get me down. I am a solitary person anyway. It's the side effects of Prolia that are wearing me down!! Driving me bonkers! (and also technology and not knowing how to even hook up a printer so that it is wireless).
Date: 4/18/2020 9:06:00 AM
Poor Acorn, perhaps the snow will protect it and help it become a tree.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2020 10:35:00 AM
that is what I hear can happen. But it makes no sense to me how acorns turn into trees. They fall right next to the tree they came from. So how do a bunch of acorns start growing all scrunched up next to each other? things that make me go Hmmmmm.
Date: 4/18/2020 8:14:00 AM
Great creativity Andrea.. Your personification is splendid.. The lines are beautifully crafted..Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 4/18/2020 3:02:00 AM
I love Personification poems, I find them firstly very creative and secondly a great deal of one's character is revealed. Great poem my friend, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/17/2020 10:39:00 PM
Andrea, Why do I always enjoy reading at twilight time? -Richard
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Date: 4/17/2020 8:26:00 PM
Hello Andrea … personalising the life of an acorn as it comes to its final judgement is impressive. Does it become food of a new tree. Fate will determine this when deep snow provides shelter - much enjoyed Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 4/17/2020 7:03:00 PM
Andrea, you have set a high standard for this contest! Your words put us into that place of friendship, loss and loneliness - "my little acorn heart shook to its core" really resonates with the sadness of grieving! Good luck and blessings!
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