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- Last -


  One last time,
  the very last opportunity
  My mood is really on edge
  I've learned so much,
  and I am so eternally grateful

    It is extremely difficult and very emotional
    and write my latest contest poem
         ... suddenly the whole world collapses
    Remember, make your entry easy to read
    Publish the post at the right time
    Read the competition rules ...

            Glory, Glory, Glory ... Hallelujah

  A tribute to those close to me
  and who understands me
      ... give me support for who I am
  - which always makes me smile and laugh
  Rain or sun ...
  Happiness can be enjoyed twice, with friends
  Friends are the family you choose
  on the journey of life

          Thanks to all my poetic
                     and wonderful friends

    Finally:
    Dear sponsor
    ... we need more competitions ...

              otherwise we will not get a train to run!









18.07.2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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If this was my last poetry contest poem Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
2nd place in the contest
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Raven Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, your gentleness does shine through in this wonderful write. Congratulations in your win in the contest, much deserved. You are deserving of all the wonderful friends you have Anne-Lise, they appreciate your gentleness and kinsness, you always bring them a smile. Touched by your sunshine. Have a wonderful Friday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 11:28 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment and congratulations, my friend Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 11:33 AM
Your muse is really blissful and soothing Anne! I love how honestly your emotions reflect through your words. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 12:19 PM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations and comments, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:29 PM
So many wonderful friends made by our poetry. This train not only forgot to run it has come off the tracks. Maybe just to distracted by everything going on. Love you my friend and take care. Virus has picked up again here. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 12:21 PM
- Viruses have picked up again in most places, Phyllis ... people travel - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Sunshine, from all across the world we all think of you my friend with your beautiful poems. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 3:40 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Congrats Anne-Lise on your podium win with your wonderful poem. Hoping all is well with you, sending kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 3:40 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Friends are family we choose and I am glad you chose me, congrats on your win dear Sunshine, a splendid write that deserves the applaud, Be well, have a great day xo
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 10:52 AM
- Thank you very much Pixie, for your lovely support :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deepa Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:41 AM
Hello Anne mam, Cute poem ..was graced by sunshine as I read.:-) Congratulations on your wonderful win.Keep writing and keep inspiring:-)Best wishes from Deepa:-)
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 7:00 AM
- Thank you very much for the congratulations, Deepa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:13 AM
Back with congrats, Anne-Lise, on your podium win.
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:54 AM
Lovely poem, Sunshine. Congrats on your win ~
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 6:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 2:46 AM
I said hallelujah with you here... nice take on the contest and you made me smile at the end.. there will be more... How ironic, PS was down and this could have been the last contest for me! Congratulations on your placement in the contest
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:47 AM
- Thank you very much for my place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 7:32 PM
Emotional and powerful writing that makes one believe that is true! Hope this moment will not come in reality dearest , Anne-Lise. Beautifully done. Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:49 AM
- Luckily this was just a topic in the contest ... thank you very much for your kindness, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 4:04 PM
haha, I love that ending you put on there after all the seriousness. Well done!
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:45 AM
- Glad it brought you a smile, Andrea ... thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Such divine feeling in your words of tribute and thanks, Anne-Lise. Just the right sentiments from your talented pen.
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 5:44 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely support, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 2:46 PM
I couldn't imagine ever imagine soup with out you my dear friend - my muse disappears often and leaves me in the lurch, but she comes back with bigger and bolder ideas, yours will also. Maybe advertise for a new one, I threatened to do that once to mine and she received my message and came back. Good luck i n the contest Sunshine Smile, but I think this is great, and your next one will be even greater! Love and hugs, Jenny. .
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 2:53 PM
- Thank you for the encouraging words, dear sister ... and you are right ... I always come back ... just rest a little :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Leffanta Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 2:13 PM
"Yesterday was your future; tomorrow will be your past; today that golden moment; the gods decreed would LAST!" We know we shall see more of your work! Aloha! Rico
Kauffman Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 11:49 PM
Anne-Lise there is yearning, a longing and deep tenderness along with gratitude here! All of us do hope this is only a contest entry! Good luck in the contest dear friend! "Please don't take your sunshine away!"
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 12:56 PM
- Dear Sam ... I'm not going anywhere ... I have experienced "the soup" both "sweet and salty" ... - as you may have seen ... I am the only one active Norwegian member here at "soup" ... lol ... I'm staying :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tor Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 11:16 PM
Well written Anne-Lise. I know it is for the contest. A pleasure to read, you have good friends here that is for sure... Stay safe my Dear...
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 12:49 PM
- Yes, it's true ... many good friends ... and I really appreciate them :) - Many thanks my friend, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 9:33 PM
Hopefully it's certainly not your last Anne, good luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 12:41 PM
... no, hopefully not the last ... but my muse did not come with me to my new home ... always a pleasure to see you my friend, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Ah, I hope the contest keep running and we keep writing, thank you for sharing your sunshine always xo
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 12:39 PM
... and always a positive smile from my rose friend ... thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Hello Sunshine smile, You have expresed yourself very well. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 3:23 PM
Hello Sunshine smile, i hope all is right with you. You are welcome my friend. Hugs. Darlene
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 12:37 PM
- Thank you very much for your greeting, dear Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 4:28 PM
Nice one Anne-Lise. I hope all is well :)
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 12:37 PM
- Everything is fine, many thanks for your visit to my poem ... nice to see you, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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