Laskrizon , 6

I am truly concerned
as i leave my Laskrizon
but,it is a three day's journey
my next black moon destination

I trust all will be well
in my absense
infiltrater's are persistent
Ahpla and pack more than capable

A dreary journey thus far
wind gusted blackened skies
bring stinging rain

Comfort come's from
my two traveling companion's

Nev,an enormous blackest black raven
unseen in the shadows
flies above,or,perches atop tree line
.....my eye's in the sky
appear's to be serious
a misleading perception
his humor keeps us loose

Noila,a proud Puma
her alert ferociousness
scout's perimeter
quiet but deadly in her wisdom

A combined effort
our future's imperil all
only by such collaboration
can unifying forces succeed

" Agemo ! " caw's Nev
immediately I scan the shadows
Nev is a stealth expert
as soon as I spot him I respond,
" yes Nev,you have new's "

" I do indeed,Noila will rest and wait
  for us to catch up ! "
a bit frustrated by that comment,
" what do you mean,catch up ? "
Nev now in cackling laughter,
" I told Noila you were dragging
  your tail as a rudder in dirt ! "

" that is not funny my friend,
  how far her distance ? "

" about a quarter day's sun
  at your pace " more laughter...

" relay to Noila,be there shortly
  I'll run as the wind "

Suppose some would find 
wise cracks annoying
the laughter keeps light hearted...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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