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Lark's Song

lark's song

as green leaves dance with the breeze . . .

gold seeps from sky


Jan. 31, 2020

the 'Hi-Ku(5)' Poetry Contest

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John Watt

Date: 2/28/2020 1:03:00 PM

I must have missed looking at POTD earlier this month, hopefully better late than never: Congrats! Love the colors and the music motif ~ John

John Fleming

Date: 2/12/2020 10:14:00 AM

I do have to say, that this form of poetry (haiku) most certainly does appeal to me...will investigate further. Enjoyed this one very much, Andrea -- cheers! Best regards. :) john

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/11/2020 3:19:00 PM

Congrats on your POTD, Andrea. Well done.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/7/2020 11:30:00 AM

Andrea, how did I miss this gem - congratulations on your POTD - a richly deserved honor for such a talented write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/7/2020 4:22:00 AM

Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai

Karen Croft

Date: 2/6/2020 5:47:00 AM

very nice Haiku congrats!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/5/2020 4:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-earned win, Andrea.

Constance La France

Date: 2/5/2020 8:52:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful haiku_Constance

Charles Messina

Date: 2/4/2020 6:32:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Andrea. Congratulations on POTD!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/4/2020 12:14:00 AM

Back to give you big congratulations on Your top win Andrea! xxoo

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/3/2020 4:21:00 AM

A golden voice on a green canvas. Kind wishes, Kai

Eve Roper

Date: 2/2/2020 9:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. my eyes are brown :) Hugs Eve

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/2/2020 7:24:00 PM

Beautiful, like Spring. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. Also, on your win in the contest. :) Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 2/2/2020 5:34:00 PM

Beautiful imagery my friend, congratulations on POTD.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/2/2020 5:03:00 PM

Hello Andrea the song of the larkis beautiful to listen to. Have a nice evening my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/2/2020 4:57:00 PM

I am so happy to see this exquisite example of how to write a proper haiku is being honored with POTD. You already know how much I admired it by my Fave. Congratulations Andrea! xxoo

Warren Doll

Date: 2/2/2020 3:00:00 PM

Andrea, this is a brilliant haiku. Congratulations on POTD. Warmest Wishes~Warren

John Lawless

Date: 2/2/2020 2:49:00 PM

You lost me with the green leaves dancing...all I see is a scruffy old squirrel doing the limbo.....but oh the promise of spring. Great POTD though, thanks for the vivid imagery