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lark's song

lark's song as green leaves dance with the breeze . . . gold seeps from sky Jan. 31, 2020 the 'Hi-Ku(5)' Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/28/2020 1:03:00 PM
I must have missed looking at POTD earlier this month, hopefully better late than never: Congrats! Love the colors and the music motif ~ John
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Date: 2/12/2020 10:14:00 AM
I do have to say, that this form of poetry (haiku) most certainly does appeal to me...will investigate further. Enjoyed this one very much, Andrea -- cheers! Best regards. :) john
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Date: 2/11/2020 3:19:00 PM
Congrats on your POTD, Andrea. Well done.
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Date: 2/7/2020 11:30:00 AM
Andrea, how did I miss this gem - congratulations on your POTD - a richly deserved honor for such a talented write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/7/2020 4:22:00 AM
Beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/6/2020 5:47:00 AM
very nice Haiku congrats!
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Date: 2/5/2020 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-earned win, Andrea.
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Date: 2/5/2020 8:52:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful haiku_Constance
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Date: 2/4/2020 6:32:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Andrea. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/4/2020 12:14:00 AM
Back to give you big congratulations on Your top win Andrea! xxoo
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Date: 2/3/2020 4:21:00 AM
A golden voice on a green canvas. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/2/2020 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. my eyes are brown :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/2/2020 7:24:00 PM
Beautiful, like Spring. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Congratulations Andrea, on Poem of the Day. Also, on your win in the contest. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/2/2020 5:34:00 PM
Beautiful imagery my friend, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 2/2/2020 5:03:00 PM
Hello Andrea the song of the larkis beautiful to listen to. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/2/2020 4:57:00 PM
I am so happy to see this exquisite example of how to write a proper haiku is being honored with POTD. You already know how much I admired it by my Fave. Congratulations Andrea! xxoo
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Date: 2/2/2020 3:00:00 PM
Andrea, this is a brilliant haiku. Congratulations on POTD. Warmest Wishes~Warren
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Date: 2/2/2020 2:49:00 PM
You lost me with the green leaves dancing...all I see is a scruffy old squirrel doing the limbo.....but oh the promise of spring. Great POTD though, thanks for the vivid imagery
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Date: 2/2/2020 1:59:00 PM
What a beautiful haiku, Andrea, congrats on POTD. Hugs, John
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Date: 2/2/2020 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations on p.o.t.d. Andrea...and for placing 1st in the contest. Very much deserved. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/2/2020 1:07:00 PM
Great imager...loved the last line....congrats on potd
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Date: 2/2/2020 12:47:00 PM
This haiku is a fresh breath, I smell spring. Wonderful, congrats on win and POTD! xomo
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Date: 2/2/2020 12:43:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest and p.o.t.d., Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2020 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Your song of the lark and green leaves makes me think Spring. Come on Spring, we are ready for your beauty.
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Date: 2/2/2020 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! Such a vivid Haiku!
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