Laptop Warming My Lap

“Without you I am finished; as if I had never placed footfall,”
“Thanks for that Pete, I think you’re neat,”
“Like some new software?”
“Don’t worry my treat”

“Windows 8 we’ll pull it down,
  Here it comes,”

“WHOOOOOO! that was great!”

“I like it when it’s fast, when you press my board,
toggle my control- shift- caps- lock keys.”

“Just a mo, I’ll have to go, putting you on sleep,”

“Men; you’re all the same, bang, bang, bang, press the key,

 then off you go.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Peter, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Ha ha, congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 10:06 PM
haha. I did a laptop one too but nothing like yours!!! BIG congrats.
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx
Yvonne Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 7:41 AM
This is very funny! I laughed out loud. A great read.
Wigley Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:28 AM
Keep forgetting to charge mine up- "Not tonight, dear......". Fun verse, Peter. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 5:53 AM
this made me laugh out loud - great humour:-) Hugs jan xx
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