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Laptop Warming My Lap

“Without you I am finished; as if I had never placed footfall,” “Thanks for that Pete, I think you’re neat,” “Like some new software?” “Don’t worry my treat” “Windows 8 we’ll pull it down, Here it comes,” “WHOOOOOO! that was great!” “I like it when it’s fast, when you press my board, toggle my control- shift- caps- lock keys.” “Just a mo, I’ll have to go, putting you on sleep,” “Men; you’re all the same, bang, bang, bang, press the key, then off you go.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 6:54:00 PM
Peter, Congratulations on your fine win. LINDA
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Date: 4/18/2015 8:25:00 AM
Ha ha, congrats!
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Date: 4/16/2015 10:06:00 PM
haha. I did a laptop one too but nothing like yours!!! BIG congrats.
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Date: 4/16/2015 2:35:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Peter:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/9/2015 7:41:00 AM
This is very funny! I laughed out loud. A great read.
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:28:00 AM
Keep forgetting to charge mine up- "Not tonight, dear......". Fun verse, Peter. Regards, Viv
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Date: 4/2/2015 5:53:00 AM
this made me laugh out loud - great humour:-) Hugs jan xx
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