Lapped Child

Tears stained her good skirt. Lapped child, he’s fair hurt. Kissed knee with first aid. Soft wiped the laud dirt.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/20/2024 9:07:00 PM

When you hit the ground, get back up and rebound! (Kissed knees help). :) gw

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/17/2024 11:23:00 PM

Kids, little people practicing to be bigger. We never seem to mature beyond hurting. Deep poem, well done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/18/2024 6:29:00 AM

We surely miss the days when mom kissed the pain away :)

Paige Hind

Date: 7/17/2024 9:13:00 AM

I'm not familiar with it either. I read the description- I guess I understand,lol....some forms are so complicated- I admire you for taking on some of them. :)

Paige Hind

Date: 7/17/2024 8:51:00 AM

Hmm...it's interesting, like always, new to me! <3 :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 9:03:00 AM

I was not very familiar with this form. Read the description. A fun puzzle!