Lapped Child

Tears stained her good skirt. Lapped child, he’s fair hurt. Kissed knee with first aid. Soft wiped the laud dirt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
July 20, 2024 at 9:07 PM
When you hit the ground, get back up and rebound! (Kissed knees help). :) gw
DiMino Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 11:23 PM
Kids, little people practicing to be bigger. We never seem to mature beyond hurting. Deep poem, well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 6:29 AM
We surely miss the days when mom kissed the pain away :)
Hind Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 9:13 AM
I'm not familiar with it either. I read the description- I guess I understand,lol....some forms are so complicated- I admire you for taking on some of them. :)
Hind Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 8:51 AM
Hmm...it's interesting, like always, new to me! <3 :) hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 9:03 AM
I was not very familiar with this form. Read the description. A fun puzzle!
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