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Lanterns of the Sky

The 1st day he commanded light to split the edge of night as He lit up every crevice from dark to blessed sight On the 2nd He severed bodied water sea from sea beneath a dome of preservation it was all that one could see On the 3rd day God commanded all the waters to be still so the earth could have her bounty & produce herself at will On the4th day he created all the lanterns of the sky sun, moon, stars of heaven, with an Ordinance from high On the 5th day he commanded all the wingly lofty birds to increase in rounds and flutter, beneath his silent word On the 6th day God commanded all the animals at large to live aside the earth in kind and serve without disparage On the 7th, God created man from little clumps of clay resting in the notion he'd love them, come what may. October 26, 2018

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Date: 11/11/2018 1:34:00 PM
Lovely poem, Pixie. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/10/2018 10:21:00 AM
P. D., your profound wording and imagery are magnificent. Congratulations on this beautiful rendering of God's Creation.
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Date: 11/9/2018 6:46:00 PM
congratulations on your win with this beautiful peace
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Date: 10/27/2018 9:41:00 AM
Hi Pixie, this is an excellent piece. You artistically tell the story of creation. I love the imagery that comes from your soft words. Your pen is running gold my friend. A fave. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/27/2018 12:34:00 AM
I always enjoy reading how God created the heavens and Earth ... Nicely done :-)
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Date: 10/26/2018 9:56:00 PM
Nicely written, Pixie! Enjoyed :)
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Date: 10/26/2018 3:49:00 PM
A great write for this contest... I like how you did this..
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Date: 10/26/2018 12:04:00 PM
God's miracles we live by..Best for a win, Pixie.
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Date: 10/26/2018 8:48:00 AM
Love this, Pixie, also very clever poetry...
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Date: 10/26/2018 7:47:00 AM
Beautifully done my friend. This was really nice.
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